The one thing that I think you need to work on is your vocabulary. Try not to repeat one word all the time. Little changes will be enough for the raters to score you high.
以下是引用yumihooo在2007-7-3 18:46:00的发言： It's a good example, though.
The one thing that I think you need to work on is your vocabulary. Try not to repeat one word all the time. Little changes will be enough for the raters to score you high.
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