以下是引用AllenTing在2007-6-24 23:36:00的发言：
If there was a chance for me to raise a question to a famous person in my major, my question will undoubtedly be: What's the key to achieve success from your opinion? According to this question, I know what the most important quality to succeed is; also, it offers me valuable experience from those successful persons; furthermore, I can get a lot of useful advice for success. The intention of asking that question derives from my personality. I am full of energy and passion, and always trying to seek success. For me, it is the success in my career that attracts me to study, work and even try to take TOEFL&GRE exams for studying aboard. Just think when you are successful in your career and get sufficient respect and honor from your colleagues, what a fantastic feeling it is! So I am eager to seize every chance to ask those famous people and learn those qualities necessary for success. Furthermore, the answers to that question will give me numerous, valuable and even vital experience. The experience from those famous people generally is specific and can tell me a lot of stories which may be largely familiar to me. From Albert Einstein, I know the answer to success is the famous equation that success equals 1% intelligence and 99% hard work; From Vint Cerf, honored as "Father of the Internet", I know the answer is respect: No matter who you are talking to, you should always be patient and respectful for what he/she says or does, as it's possible that you can learn something new from everyone. Besides, I maybe experience lots of situations which are similar to the one that those famous people have. Therefore, the experience or stories famous people have will certainly benefit me and give me valuable references such as how to solve a hard problem or how to do an effective communication. In some degrees, they act like teachers, help me achieve success correctly and effectively. Last but not least, I could get lots of advice from the answer to success made by famous people. For instance, if there is an opportunity for me to open up a company, I can obtain much useful advice from those successful businessmen who have already owned a company. Probably they could tell me what I should do or not do which can avoid me doing something wrong as much as possible. On the other side, if no advice is provided, I have to do all the affairs on my own judgments some of which may be unsuitable or harmful to my business. As a conclusion, asking famous people that the key to success will obviously provide me what the quality I should have for success is, experience or stories that are helpful to me and lots of advice for me to follow. With the help of those famous people, I will attain success effectively and confidently.
先见20楼.得克给你改的. 这是我改的. 一起讨论吧, If there was a chance for me to raise a question to a famous person in my major,(无所未了，我会这么写，If I am provided a chance to raise a question to a famous person about my,你这里的in my major啥意思？？) my question will undoubtedly be: What's the key to achieve success from your opinion? According to this question, I know what the most important quality (that a person can have) to succeed is; also, it offers me valuable experience (guidelines) from those successful persons; furthermore, I can get a lot of useful advice for success. The intention of asking that question derives from my personality. I am full of energy and passion, and always trying to seek success. For me, it is the success in my career that attracts me to study, work and even try to take TOEFL&GRE exams for studying aboard. (I am a person who long for success, and chase my dream with my energy and passion. I am driven by success to study and work hard for my job, and try my best to take TOEFL&GRE for my studying aboard.) Just think when you are successful in your career and get sufficient respect and honor from your colleagues, what a fantastic feeling it is! So I am eager to seize every chance to ask those famous people and learn those qualities necessary for success. Furthermore, the answers to that question will give me numerous, valuable and even vital experience. The experience from those famous people generally is specific and can tell me a lot of stories which may be largely familiar to me. From Albert Einstein, I know the answer to success is the famous equation that success equals 1% intelligence and (plus) 99% hard work; From Vint Cerf, honored as "Father of the Internet", I know the answer is respect: No matter who you are talking to, you should always be patient and respectful for what he/she says or does, as it's possible that you can learn something new from everyone. Besides, I maybe experience lots of situations which are similar to the one that those famous people have. Therefore, the experience or stories famous people have will certainly benefit me and give me valuable references such as how to solve a hard problem or how to do an effective communication. In some degrees, they act like teachers, help me achieve success correctly and effectively. Last but not least, I could get lots of advice from the answer to success made by famous people. For instance, if there is an opportunity for me to open up a company, I can obtain much useful advice from those successful businessmen who have already owned a company. Probably they could tell me what I should do or not do which can avoid me (that what I should do to avoid) doing something wrong as much as possible. On the other side, if no advice is provided, I have to do all the affairs on my own judgments some of which may be unsuitable or harmful to my business. | 
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发表于 2007-6-24 23:35:00
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