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agree or disagree:teenagers should work while studying

Currently, the intensive competition coerces multitudes of the students to have a job and go to the real world at an unprecedented lower age. however, when I am asked by the question that whether a teenager should work while studying, the answer will be irrefutably no .Unexaggerated speaking, holding a job by the teenagers will do more harm than good both in physical and psychological aspects.

 

One of the most remarkable defects of the situation mentioned above is that the teenagers can hardly concentrate themselves on studying, for they must allocate some of their time to work and commute. With no doubt,
                    the greater memory, the higher innate impulse and the stronger curious, all of these factors are demonstrating the fact that the most crucial target for the teenagers is to construct a strong basis of knowledge in diverse aspects. Thereby hardly can working and earning money overweigh the importance of studies. In fact, with the dramatic globalization in the world, it is hard to imagine how one supports him/her self in the whole life without spending the precious teenage-period on studies but hanging on working.

 

Besides the notable one is the lacking of mature, which will undoubtedly unable the teenagers to distinguish the positive with the negative clearly. Since the teenagers during this period are not fully developed and have not construct a comprehensive out look of world, they will more or less be affected from being exposed too much to the society, which will somewhat deteriorate their heart and lead them to act badly. For example, a teenager working in a pub will unconsciously be interested in the alcohol day by day, thus he/she will can not help trying the feeling of drinking, which may go to the extreme that being addict to it. In this sense, we can hardly ignore the disadvantage of that.

 

Most teenagers are not able to adjust their attitudes quickly as the adults, which will not contribute to bad effect ordinarily while be hazardous in some cases such as being critic by the boss, not getting the desired amount of salary in the end and being isolated by the counterparts, which of them are all the factual trivial in daily life. In this circumstance, the young teenagers will often tend to be attacked and lose most of their self-esteem totally, for they have not had the ability to adept to the real affairs automatically.

 

By and large, every wisdom parents will not allow their teenagers to work at that early age in avoiding all of the substantial hazards. On the contrary, the core to educate their children in this period is to cultivate them with good study habits and develop them to a powerful
                    person both physically and mentally.