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现在是不是比以前更需要cooperate的能力？ Nowadays, with development of technology, more and more machines gradually replace displace human to operate in the factory. The cooperation among factory workers has been replaced by the cooperation between workers and machines. Currently, a multitude of people often go behind the stereotype that we need less cooperation spirit than ever beofore, (before) because / for we could assign artificial-intelligent machine to work for society. However, after contemplating and comparing the cons and pros, from my perspective, (I support that B, in many ways, is simply the optimal ) we still need cooperation to do other things that machine cannot achieve. Obviously / apparently, enviroment (environment) protection expects hurman (human) being, rather than machine, from different nations to cooperate with each other. All countries can benefit from such collaboration. For instance, global warming has become more and more serious issue around the world. Scientist are very concerned that, overfull CO2(Carbon Dioxide), one of main kind green house gas produced by power plant, factory and cars, would absorb too much heat from sun, resulting in the melt of galacial (glacier) at Antarctic and the rise of sea level. Therefore, we urgently need both developed country and developing country to coordination to control the discharge of CO2. Additionally, new era business need more cooperation than ever before, which is another factor that deserves some words here. In other word / especially, local business and enterprenur (entrepreneur) ought to assist to each other to compete with FDI company to maintain the stable local market share. For instance, P&G, a multi-national companies producing consumer product, locally produce and sell washing detergent in China. The other local detergent brands have been seriously and negatively interupted. (interrupted) Even some of them have been bankrupt and workers have been unemployed. The local economy has been seriously damaged. Thus, the rest of servival (survivals) detergent manufacturers should merge togather (together) to become stronger and break P&G's monoplification. (monopolization) 1+1>2. Consequently / eventually, due the discussion mentioned above, we are left to conclude that, so far as we know, the more we cooperate with each other, and the stronger we are, and the more benefit we can gain. | 
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