4.29机经习作，请高人看看，6.9就要考了，这是第一篇

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It is important to know every event
happening around the world even if it is unlike to have any effect on your
daily life.

    

 

    

题目分析：

    

支持本观点，人们应该了解发生在世界上every event，即使这些事情可能不会对我们的日常生活产生影响

    

 

    

中文作文：

    

在世界上，每天都发生很多的事情，有些事情很可能会对我们的生活产生直接的影响，我们应该了解关注这些事情。但是，还有很多事情可能不会对我们的日常生活产生影响，我们是否应该了解他们呢？我认为，作为一个在全球一体化发展时代的人，我们应该了解这些事情，虽然他们可能不会对我们的日常生活产生影响。

    

 

    

首先，那些可能不会对我们日常生活产生影响的事情也会给我们带来知识，开阔视野，我们可以从中学习到很多经验。知识是一个人最重要的财富，如果每个人的知识都增加了，我们的国家就会繁荣富强。我的老师，他知道很多发生在世界各地的事情，很多事情非常的有趣，虽然和他的日常生活没有关系，我们都觉得这个老师很有学问，都很敬佩他。所以，为了得到知识，我们应该通过各种方式了解发生在世界上的任何事情。

    

 

    

其次，随着全球一体化进程的加快，人们的发展被紧紧的联系在一起，越来越多的事情和我们息息相关。有些看起来和我们日常生活没有关系的事情，过段时间很可能会对我们的生活产生影响，对于这些事情，我们应该了解。举个例子：在伊拉克发生的战争，我的朋友都认为不会对我们的日常生活产生任何影响，但是过了几个月，由于伊拉克战争的原因，石油供应减少，石油价格上调，我的朋友每个月的汽车费用支出都增大了很多。

    

 

    

最后，感觉没有什么更好的观点

    

 

    

结尾，总之人们之间关系越来越紧密，地球变得越来越小，我们应该尽量了解发生在世界上的各种事情。therefore，随着科学技术的进步，我们目前可以很方便的得到各种信息，我们应该好好利用这些便利，来获取信息。

    

 

    

Many events take place in our world every
day. We must pay attention to the events that are like to have effects on own daily lives.[YG1]  But, whether we should know the events that maybe have no effect on
our lives? As far as I’m concerned, it is fairly important to know these events
around us. Of the countless reasons or facts that can strengthen my points of
view, I will present the most consequential and conspicuous ones here.

    

 

    

The first plain truth, I am presenting
here, is that we can obtain more knowledge from the every event that take place
all over the world, although some of the events are unlike to have effects on
our daily lives. Knowledge is one of the key words of our time. Nothing is more
important than knowledge nowadays. A man without knowledge, many of us
believed, loses many opportunities in the society. Accordingly, so great is our
passion for knowledge, that we are becoming increasingly more dependent on
knowledge. For example, Professor Li, my college teacher, always told my
classmates and me many interesting events that took place all over the world.
We all think he has more knowledge than any of our teachers and want to take
his classes. He is very popular in the students. Hence, knowing every event
benefits our people largely.

    

 

    

In addition, with the rapid development
of  “全球一体化”, the relationships between country and country, people and people
are more
close[YG2] . Some events that take place far away from us and are unlike to
have effect on us at that time, maybe influent us deeply in the future. For
example, when the battle of Iraq
broke, most of my friends and me thought that the battle had no relationship
with our daily lives. But, Iraq
is an important oil
exporting country[YG3]  in the world, the price of gasoline increased sharply in our
country after the beginning of the battle. My friends and I spent more money on
the gasoline just because the battle.

    

 

    

In conclusion, paying attention to the
every event around the world is very important, since we can obtain useful
knowledge. Moreover, with the development of technology, we can easily get the
information we are interesting. We should get more information about the world
events by the new technology.

    

        

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 [YG1]这个地方要用复数吧

                

            

        

            

                

 [YG2]是否应该用closer

                

            

        

            

                

 [YG3]表达是否合理

                

            

    

zgfat533

不错，挺好的，字数再多点就更好了。