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这是自己的第5篇和第6篇作文，没有限时，用了很长时间，感觉很不好，7月7号就考了，很着急~~ Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. In the competitive modern society many people set their goal as to achieve success . Some believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances while others, from a different point of view think that it is careful planning that leads to success. Although both have their reasons I prefer that a careful planning would be more reliable.
We cannot deny that chance plays an important or sometimes essential role in success gaining. Quite a few successful men take chances as a trigger in their life. But if one has not any preparation how can he/she seize the opportunity when it comes? Take the entrance examination for instance. It gives us the chance for a higher education. Hard working students who get themselves fully prepared in order to pass the exam would surly seize the chance of a further and better education. However, students who have done poorly in their daily life would much probably fail in the exam. That is to say, only chances are far from enough to a successful life.
Compared to chances and risks a careful planning is more reliable and seasonable. A well-made plan would help people fully recognized what they really what to get. It is not rarely to see that so many persons especially the young doing things busily without a clear aim. Some of them even do not know what they really desire. A careful planning first help people setting a goal they eager to achieve . With this specific aim persons would not act aimlessly. So they would be able to concentrate themselves on those things contributing to their success.
Apart from a clear target a good planning would also enable us to work more efficiently. During the long road to success we might face various kinds of difficulties and sometimes we just do not know what to do and how to solve those problems. It is a careful plan that tells people how to start, how to react when facing difficulties and which part should be seriously treated and put more energy on while others are less important. Under these instruction we would work more efficiently without the waste of time and energy. In anther hand a planning before work probably prevents people from making mistakes when they face difficulties. Persons are less likely to get lost in such serious situations owing to the help of a plan.
In conclusion though we cannot ignore the effect of valuable opportunities during the way of gaining success a well-designed panning means much to normal people. We can do nothing but to get down to working hard .It is a well-prepared plan that helps us to seize chances when they comes.
Topic:
If you could change one important thing about your hometown,what would you change? Use specific examples to support your anwser.
If it were my right to change one significant thing about my hometown, I would no doubt plant more trees. It is widely recognized that trees do lots of good to our environment as well as people's health. But in my hometown people pay more attention to build skyscrapers than plant trees, which less developed regions always do.
Matching modernization of the small city is the better living conditions of citizens. And the living environment has much to do with trees. During daytime the chlorophyll leave contain ca change the carbon dioxide into oxygen which is vital to all livings. What's more, carbon dioxide adds much heat to the air, heightening the global temperature and finally leads to various serious problems. For example, accompanied by the increasing average temperature is the thaw of some icebergs and the polar ice caps , causing the sea levels rises. . That means some small islands with low altitude would disappear forever from the world. For another hand, the temperature of my hometown has already quite high during summer. How people will feel if it gets hotter? Plants especially trees can prevent the situation becoming more serious.
Yet the influence of planting trees runs deeper. My hometown sets in the northern part of China where sandstorms is common especially in spring. The weather is quite dry and the air becomes awfully dirty. Sand and dust floating in the air cause illnesses to citizens. That is why spring is the last season I like. But if there are plenty of trees things will be totally different. Researchers have already pointed out that green plants can effectively prevent the soil becoming sand as well as reducing the wind speed. The close connection between trees and environment is increasingly recognized. From my point of view it sounds ridiculous that the number of concrete buildings in my hometown has enormously increased at the expense of green belts.
Luckily as things stand now, my hometown is aching a better tree-planting system. I believe that trees are crucial to a better city to live in. I am quite convinced that these trees would certainly improve our living conditions and incredibly beneficial to the human race. If we could steer more funds toward essential tree-planting, then our hometown might truly become more beautiful and attract increasing number of tourists. 对任何一篇提意见都好，感激不尽，多谢了
Topic:
If you could change one important thing about your hometown,what would you change? Use specific examples to support your anwser.
If it were my right to change one significant thing about my hometown, I would no doubt plant more trees. It is widely recognized that trees do lots of good to our environment as well as people's health. But in my hometown people pay more attention to build skyscrapers than plant trees, which less developed regions always do.
Matching modernization of the small city is the better living conditions of citizens. And the living environment has much to do with trees. During daytime the chlorophyll leave contain ca change the carbon dioxide into oxygen which is vital to all livings. What's more, carbon dioxide adds much heat to the air, heightening the global temperature and finally leads to various serious problems. For example, accompanied by the increasing average temperature is the thaw of some icebergs and the polar ice caps , causing the sea levels rises. . That means some small islands with low altitude would disappear forever from the world. For another hand, the temperature of my hometown has already quite high during summer. How people will feel if it gets hotter? Plants especially trees can prevent the situation becoming more serious.
Yet the influence of planting trees runs deeper. My hometown sets in the northern part of China where sandstorms is common especially in spring. The weather is quite dry and the air becomes awfully dirty. Sand and dust floating in the air cause illnesses to citizens. That is why spring is the last season I like. But if there are plenty of trees things will be totally different. Researchers have already pointed out that green plants can effectively prevent the soil becoming sand as well as reducing the wind speed. The close connection between trees and environment is increasingly recognized. From my point of view it sounds ridiculous that the number of concrete buildings in my hometown has enormously increased at the expense of green belts.
Luckily as things stand now, my hometown is aching a better tree-planting system. I believe that trees are crucial to a better city to live in. I am quite convinced that these trees would certainly improve our living conditions and incredibly beneficial to the human race. If we could steer more funds toward essential tree-planting, then our hometown might truly become more beautiful and attract increasing number of tourists. 对任何一篇提意见都好，感激不尽，多谢了
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