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ryan

207.    Charlotte Parkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.
(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities
(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities
(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included

答案是D, 能帮忙解释一下为什么A 用including 不对。  Thanks!

lizaz

including本身没问题吧，A中缺少介词for的补出，D中补出了for，使and前后的并列关系更清楚。

ivey

用 including 时造成语意错误. 那个女权主义者的想法是在都市的公寓住宅中要附设育儿设施, 还有在市郊的聚落要附设公共社交设施.
如果用including, 则变成举例说明, 则意思变成:
urban apartment houses = child-care facilities
clustered suburban houses = communal eating and social facilities.

Snazzy

以下是引用lizaz在2003-11-16 14:28:00的发言：
including本身没问题吧，A中缺少介词for的补出，D中补出了for，使and前后的并列关系更清楚。

sounds rational, but why not use 2 that clauses or 2 with prases to achieve parallesm?

springappleleaf

I am confused after reading all the discussions throughout in CD. (I ran the search)

lizaz above says "用 including 时造成语意错误. 那个女权主义者的想法是在都市的公寓住宅中要附设育儿设施, 还有在市郊的聚落要附设公共社交设施.
如果用including, 则变成举例说明, 则意思变成:
urban apartment houses = child-care facilities
clustered suburban houses = communal eating and social facilities"

However, other people think "that included child-care facilities" and " with communal eating and social facilities" modify "houses".

"that included child-care facilities" is Ding Yu Cong Ju, or Bing Yu Cong Ju?

rt316

that included是定语从句 / with部分是介词短语做定语；

另：including我认为是现分做定语。

springappleleaf

Thanks, Stoneren!

What about lizaz 's explanation "那个女权主义者的想法是在都市的公寓住宅中要附设育儿设施, 还有在市郊的聚落要附设公共社交设施."?

If,like what you said, that included是定语从句 / with部分是介词短语做定语, then 那个女权主义者的想法是: build 附设育儿设施的公寓住宅, not 在都市的公寓住宅中 build 育儿设施.

Please confirm whether my understanding is correct.  Thanks again.  I have spent one hour on this question.

rt316

我认为你所指的build在这里没有任何暗示。

D－call for urban apartment houses that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities.

女权主义者仅仅呼吁urban apartment houses里要有(included)child-care facilities，同时也呼吁suburban houses里要有(with)communal eating and social facilities，至于build的对象没有明确指出。

springappleleaf

According your explanation, I think that "(included)child-care facilities" more sound like Bu Yu Cong Ju

Andrea625

that clause sounds more formal.