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The ability to cooperate well with others is more important today than in the past,  agree or disagree?
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There is a growing worldwide awearness that Rome was not built by one person. Nowadays With the fierce competetion in sports, scholl, business, political stage and all
other areas, the ability to cooperate well with others is more and more significant than in the past. So I agree with what is stated in the question. It's no easy job to furnish every reasons why cooperation is so important today, but, on the whole, three factors stand out from other, including making people think more carefully, making complicated job comleted easily and giving people encouragement.

To begin with, on no account can one thinks over everything carefully. "Three soldiers thinks as a general" That is how one of the great writer Hugo remarked once. People usually feel confused to find a solution for a problem, however, if they learn to cooperate with others, the problem will soon be solved. Through discussing, all possible sollutions will be analyzed. Finally, those soidiers may solve a problem one general can't do.

In addition, jobs today are so complicated that it needs different people to do different work. As a result, people should cooperate to avoid mistakes. For example, most software, such as MS Windows, MSN and OICQ, and websites, like Yahoo!, MSN.com, and Google, all are made not by a person or a few people. In fact, even more than 5000 people contributes to the Windows Vista. Since the amount of the work is so huge, different people should take different responsibilities. But if I write codes of a component which don't offer interfaces to yours, how can these components join together. Consequently, we must cooperate together through discussion, meeting and adjusting the plans.

Last but not least, cooperation can also mean muture understanding and encouragement. As a illustration, I'm the goalkeeper of my school's soccer team. In the first match of state's league match not long ago, I made many mistakes on the first half. In the half-match braek, facing the score 0:3, I was so frustrated that even son't dare to go togother with other teammates. However, the dean and some other teammates came near me. Surprisingly, istead of asking me how to do in the second half, they first criticised tehemselves and then encouraged me to show my common condition. Do you know what happened then? In the other half I showed perfextly and we finally win the match with the score 4:3!

Juging from the reasons presented above, we can safely conclude that the ability to cooperate well with others is more and more important than in the past.