无重复22套 GWD1-Q34

alsokkk

    

GWD1-Q34:

    

Although people
in France consume fatty
foods at a rate comparable to the United States,
their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

    

 

    

1. people in France
        consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
2. people in France
        and the United States
        consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
3. fatty foods are consumed by people in
        France at a comparable
        rate to the United
          States’s, their
4. the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the
        same, the
5. the rate of people consuming fatty
        foods is about the same in France
        and the United States,
        the

答案是B, 请问D为什么不对

jason_jufe

A: their has no clear reference;

B: the best.at the same rate is the correct idiom.

C: at a comparable rate to the US's is awkward and wordy. thier has no clear reference;passive voice is weak.

D: the inverted word order only contributes to the incoherence of the phrases; wordy and redundant.

E: wordy and redundant. people consuming fatty foods can not modify rate.

遥远的绿洲

选项D只是说明了fatty food在法国和美国消费,缺少一个people,所以不知道是人消费掉还是其他什么消费掉了,选项B意思更清晰

alsokkk

非常清楚。谢谢二位！

阿土莎莎

zhiyinfeifei

3x

jj_banana

同问~我选的是d, 另一个原因是和后面的主句结构也保持了一致。

d是错误的理由是不是因为d没有了people会使原文的意思发生改变？

angelsgx

E中的the rate of people consuming其中consuming是修饰people,而people是the rate of 后面的内容，看起来是没有问题的，前面讨论了一个比例，后面讨论了比例，前后使用让步句型讨论两个比例之间的反差。E看上去很正确呀

nerakuhs

以下是引用angelsgx在2008-8-6 0:24:00的发言：

E中的the rate of people consuming其中consuming是修饰people,而people是the rate of 后面的内容，看起来是没有问题的，前面讨论了一个比例，后面讨论了比例，前后使用让步句型讨论两个比例之间的反差。E看上去很正确呀

E为啥错丫 我也选了E。。。。

wellner

E项“the rate of people consuming fatty foods"原意改变，为“食用高脂肪食物的人的率"。

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