TWE133 一些小问题顺便附上第一篇作文希望大家多多指教

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我看了Budlite 6分心得真的好羡慕，他说开头，结尾，正一，反一都可以套用模版，真正写的只有正二，我想我是不是也应该好好总结自己的模板，因为多年不写作文，词汇极其贫乏，考场临时发挥肯定不行，不知道这样行不行，还有老是听人家说有什么万能例子，什么人性啊，可是我还是不是很理解，万能例子真的那么有用吗，我是不是也要准备许多万能例子呢？

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years are the most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

Which is the most significant stage in one’s whole life? The answer differs from person to person. Adolescent is one of the most convincible answers, nevertheless my own experience told me that it is one’s childhood that plays an important role in one's future development.

 

Childhood is best time for us to learn language, science subjects, and musical instrument, that is why parents attach so much emphasis children's education. They try every means to ensure good education of their children. In order to get the entrance to Key elementary school, one of my relatives even donated forty thousand RMB. They said that children’s education is the foundation of a promising future.

 

What's more, one forms his/her worldview life that affects our whole life. Our lives, to a large extend, are affected by our recognition of our surroundings. A child who is surrounded by love is more likely to give love to others. On the other hand, most juvenile delinquents have through a hard time in the stage of their childhood such as a child from a divorce family. Myself is a good case in point. When I was a little girl, whenever I took bus with my father, he gave seat to the old and young. So I followed his lead and did the same thing. It is my childhood that makes me a kind, honest and diligent person.

 

The attitude toward and the ability to overcome difficulties are also gained in one’s childhood, which contribute a lot to one’s optimistic attitude toward life. Myself is a good case in point. Once I was chosen to take a math’s competition, however, I was the mediocre one among those competitors. Frustrated by not getting high score in exams, I am tired of learning. Fortunately, I finally realized that it is no use complaining all day, put more time on study is a better way to solve the problem.

 

Although adolescent also plays an crucial role for one’s future development, taking account of all these factors, we may safely draw the conclusion it is advisable for us to attach much more importance to one’s childhood for its great influence on one’s whole life.

在这里再次感谢一下IBT论坛上的版主jojo姐，她已经帮我看了一下作文，并提出了很多宝贵的意见，这是仔细改过的论文，希望大家也来看看，小妹在次谢过

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-11 21:22:53编辑过]

zs198413

自己顶一下