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楼主
发表于 2007-1-30 10:13:00 | 只看该作者

求助

Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper's bullet during the First World War. Horace Pippin, a Black American painter, worked by holding the brush in his right hand and guiding its movements with his left

(A)  Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper's bullet during the First World War

(B)   In spite of his right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper's bullet during the First World War

(C)  Because there had been a sniper's bullet during the First World War that crippled his right hand and arm

(D)  The right hand and arm being crippled by a
                sniper's bullet during the First World War

(E)   His right hand and arm crippled by a sniper's
                bullet during the First World War

为什么不选择B啊

沙发
发表于 2007-1-30 11:05:00 | 只看该作者
选E吗
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-30 11:07:00 | 只看该作者
是啊
地板
发表于 2007-1-30 12:10:00 | 只看该作者
A都错在哪里呢?
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发表于 2007-1-31 22:16:00 | 只看该作者

A不好的原因是: 第一,太 wordy, 第二,being 的存在多餘

B不對是因為 in spite of 要接名詞,但是 his right hand and arm being crippled by... 並非名詞或名詞片語,要接也應該是his right hand and arm's being crippled by...,可是這種說法不好,不簡潔,沒有E簡潔清楚。

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-31 23:03:00 | 只看该作者
thanks
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