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Social groups are often divided into two groups when it comes  to the question of making money. Some maintain that one person should make as much  money as  possible, while others argue that a certain amount of money is enough. As far as I am concerned, in the condition that the amount of money can be decided, I would like to make a satisfied money for the following palpable and profound reasons and instances.

First, making satisfied money refers to the status that the amount of mney who can balance work and entertainment in a sound condition. That is, different people have different satisfied money inasmuch as the mental amount, the ability, the desire and the condition, for different groups and individuals, are diverse to some extent. So, Satified money is good for any individual in handling the work and money in that our society has changed greatly and has offered no basis for comparasion among individuals. To put this another way, everyone should statisfy the amount of money they possess and hold no envy mental situation. This is important for everyone in our society. On the contrary, if you want to make a large amount of money and go beyound what you have, exceeding the balance point, you maybe not have a satisfied life and even put your health in great danger. So, making satisfied money is my choice.

Second, making a large money maybe pushes you to do some illegal things if you have only one idea to make them. In other words, that sometimes makes you do what you don't want to do. For example, there is a saying that the end justifies the means. But, if you only want to make a satisfied money, you can live a enjoyable life and have good mood averyday. Let's take this in the following way. After you are off work, you don't need to continue doing the jobs because you have enough moeny for your family, and you can go home to enjoy time with them. But if you want to exert yourself to make a large money, you should work after most people have go home. This is the cost for large money in many cases in today's society.

To sum up, due to the reasons and examples mentioned above, I have built a solid foundation for my propensity: to make a satisfied money if you want to have a sound life and good relationship of work and life.

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Barron Test 4 Writing: making a large amount of money or making a satisfied living.

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