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发表于 2006-12-28 22:26:00 | 只看该作者

第一次发文章。希望大家多多指教

last night was xmas eve.i went to a club named "baby face" with my friend.we danced the whole night,very fantastic but so tired.
i have to stay home today,because i have no power to go out.i have watched a movie right now ,named devil wears prada.i suggest that every girl would watch it.it is so great.i learned more from this movie.
someone said,love is the most important thing in women's life.another people's view is job is the most important thing for a woman.i don't know which is the correct.maybe there is no answer to this question which is the most important thing in a woman's life.because different woman has different dream.the most important thing which i consider is that you must know what thing is your really want to get.woman should't daydreaming that there is a pretty guy want to marry her,or there is a rich guy or muscular guy... yeah,we should have a dream.the dream is about independence,confidence and being strong.then we should follow our dream.
i really appreciat Andrea'a choice.if i was her,i have no courage to make this decision.
people always fight to get something they don'r really want to .such as money,fashion clothing,fame and so on.these thing will cheat people.when they finally get them,them won't feel happy.
the most important thing but the most difficult thing is that know what is my real need。
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发表于 2007-1-6 16:51:00 | 只看该作者
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