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zhu0115

It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money.  Agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is more important to earn a large number of money through working; the other will argue that enjoying themselves in their workplace will be a more crucial factor of job. As far as I concerned, I do agree with the later saying. Money, though, is necessary in life, it can not control the various aspects of one’s life, especially one’s success. Also, for most cases, being diligent in working can always lead to, at least near to the success. Comparatively speaking, working with interests will be better than with only aim of money.

Although people can not live without money, which can provide ones with the basic food，living place, as well as health care, the money itself will not be able to bring or represent one’s success. For example, if some one goes out to work only for the money which perhaps is not the poor number only for surviving, he will soon feel bored in the job, even find declining happiness in his life, then lose his work energy for which he may miss successful chances to achieve his aim or ambition. 

In the workplace, there are unavoidably or undeniably dull and drowsy items or cases because the ordinary people always run the job for long time. Thus, if one urges to obtain the boss’ appreciation or trust, he or she should keep up his or her job with continuous efforts or enthusiasm, which will be easily persisted as he or she enjoys the job with enough interests. At the same time, there is likelihood that it will be the fabulous and desirable thing and offers good mood, which might lead to good behavior during work, also good experience in workplace may lead to good environment in life, namely, it will develop a good circulation between work and other elements. 

However, each job will not be the longing one, and no job can be interesting all the time, maybe boredom is inherent in any kind job. But, with good mood in the work, people can likely do their job better, enjoy more and lessen stress from the job more easily than ones without nice mood.  

In short, the more interesting in job will lead the more likelihood to succeed, on the contrary, the more money obtained from job will surely not mean the more success. Thus, I think it is an intelligent choice to consider enjoying work more important than earning money alone.

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-16 22:00:27编辑过]

Joypan

以下是引用zhu0115在2006-12-16 21:59:00的发言：

It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money.  Agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is more important to earn  large amounts of money through working; while others
                            may argue that enjoying themselves in their workplaces  be a more crucial factor when choosing a job. As far as I  am concerned, I do agree with the latter saying. Money, though, is necessary in life, it can not control the various aspects of one’s life, especially one’s success. Also, in most cases, be diligent in working can alwayslead to, at least,not far from the success. Therefore, working with interests is better than working with aim for money.

zhu0115

thanks!