匆匆地下星期就要考了，发一篇刚写的作文

jackiechan

大家看看，给我提点意见，这样的水平是不是要考虑退考或者转考？

Nowadays,there is a common debate among we college students that whether the knowledge learned through study is more important than the ability of creative for a person to be successful.Some agree that what we learn from study is of more significant,while others hold the opposite opinion.When it comes to me,I would agree with this statement.Through study, we  not only inherit the human wisdom but also foster our ability to solve most of the current problems.Furthermore,it is a world wide recognition that accumulation is the foundation of the ability of creative.

Studying is the best way for us to inherit our forefather's wisdom.During the long time of human history,numerous intelligent and dedicating people put their whole life into the exploration of the nature of our surroundings and we ourselves.Their work,no matter in the physical or the artistic field,is of great merits for us.They provide us with plenty of knowledge or methods in the process of our success.We Chinese people still take the advantage of some of the theory of Confusicous to manage our huge country efficiently.If we do not study,we will have no chance to use those knowledge at hand.

The knowledge we learn through study can also foster our excellent capability to solve many of our nowaday problems.Not all the difficulties we are confronted with need creatiion.Some just beyond one individual's knowledge rang but within the human wisdom.The only thing we need to do is just to learn.Imagine that your company have a good chance to make a large fortune but without the money to start the projuct.What should we do?Abadon?No!If one once learned some accouting course,he will know that there are enough ways to collect money including borrowing them from banks and selling your company's stock.This situation is not rare.Since most of the problems we handle can be easily solved with the help of the knowledge we learn,learning is more important for us to be successful.

Furthermore,learning usually lay a solid foudation for people to be creative.Human being creative history is a history that we make new inventions on the bases of the old thinhs or we develop new theory whether develop or learn a lesson from the old ones.Just as the old saying goes:"No pain,no gain."We can also conclude that "No learning,no creating."

Certainly,the ability of creative has its own advangtages such as breaking the old useless rules and  adjust our life according to the new situation.However,I still think the knowledge we learned is of more importance.The widom we get from our forefather teaches us a lot and enables us to solve most of the problems.Meanwhile,the knowledge is the foudation for us to be creative.

for一

我也没有经验，不知道写的怎么样，但是可能长短句结合可以再改进一下吧

jackiechan

谢谢ls,再发一篇，请大家路过的有时间的过提点意见

Nowadays,with the decreasing of the old resources of fossil such as gas,oil and coal,it has become a common concern that how soon those renewable resources of energy form such as wind,water and sunlight can take the place of the old ones.Some people believe the fast developing science make the day come quickly,while others hold the opposite opinion.When this issue comes to me,I strong disagree the idea that the renewable resources will replace the current energy forms soon.

From the scientific and techonoligical point of view,there is still a long time before we totally master the method to make use of the renewable resources although we have progress a lot in the clean energy exploration field.Energies such as wind and water are so confined to some specific area that we are not free to get them anywhere.The water power stations in my country are mostly built in the remote river and mountain ares in order to caght enough water power and the contrution is both time consuming and expensive.We have not developed enought to overcome some problems to use the renewable resources.

It's true that we are worried about the future shortage of current unrenewable resources.The oil prices is continously going up and coals are expected to be uesed up in the next 5 or 6 decades.But presently we are still obsessed with plenty of energy for us to live our life.It is not the very urgernt time for us to develop the replaceable resources as soon as possible.

Furthermore,people are so seperated in differnt regions that it's difficult to promote the widely utility of the new develped technology.Even the most developed country,the United Stated,is still in a state of relying mostly on the old resources.How can we expect that the new technology is spreaded among all the countries?

Certainly,some may hold that we will eventually run out of all the current resourses and we have to subsitute the new energy for them.However,days are far before we replace them. The technology doesn't permit, the situation isn't urgent and the countries throught the earth are not ready.

lixiang1986

感觉这么写比较好：不能很快替代的原因是：1，技术上的，新能源不成熟，利用率是一问题，新能源本身制约
                                                                                2，经济上的，没钱换代，政府负担重，公司不愿冒风险
                                                                                3.从 政策可行性上的，新的能源需要配套，能源采集，使用，各个环节都需跟上》》》》得出结论，前途是光明的，道路是曲折的
楼主写的不错了，再在原因上梳理下可能更好。
仅发表下自己的意见，望大家指正！

jackiechan

再发一篇

Nowadays,there is a common debate among we college students that whether we should take the most diffcult class at university,even if we cannot get the top grades in them.Some belive that whatever cources we take,the harder it is ,the more we will benefit.Others, however, hold the totally opposite opinion.When this issue comes to me,I am strongly approved of taking the class according to our interest and capability.

It has been widely accepted that learning to the best of our strength can benefit us most.No one of us is capable of every thing.We are born to be suitable for different areas.Bill Gates is an excellent leader in a company but not a good maker during a college test.Our recently hero,Liu Xiang,performs well in the atheletic field but may be not good at drawing pictures.There is no reason for every student in the college to take all the diffcult cources.

In spite of the unnecessity to take the most hard class,we may also lost our confidence during the study of some courses such as the Higher Mathematics and so on.People need to be encourouged from time to time.Though we need the appropriate extent of stress,being always in a state of feeling bad and awkward will not only harm our health but also lower our spirit to study,which may eventually lead to a fail of more subjucts.If we take donnot take every diffcult hard class,we may have confidence to do our best.

Furthermore,interest is the very decisive factor in a person's future achievenments.Some of us have already dicided what kind of job to take after graduation.They are only willing to learn those job-relating courses.For them,any other distraction may be a waste of time and energy.Not to mention the most diffcult class often chengllege us a lot.Since it is useless for some people to learning those unrelevent job,they should not be pushed to take them.

Certainly,some of us us may think that most of the diffcult courses are of great academic merits,which can enhance our abilty to perform better in our career.I still donnot agree that all of us have the necessity to take them.We should learn according to our strength and interest.Additionally,we cannot learn better without confidence.