[原创]twe1请看看我的第二篇

xiaolongxia

 

1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people attend college or university. Depending on personal experience, character type; different people may give different answer. From my point of view, there are three conspicuous reasons: career preparation, new experience, increased knowledge. 

First, career preparation is the major reason drive majority of people attend college. There is no doubt that, job market is more competitive than decades before. It is widely accept that university degree is essential to get a decent job. For instance, my uncle was turned down by every company due to lack of college degree. Frustrated by this experience, he made great effort to attend college. After graduation from a famous university, he managed to get a position in IBM Company. In a word, attending college or university is a short cut to decent job. 

Besides career preparation, many people attend college to experience new life. For most people, it is the first time to move into a new place. As for me, campus life is fascinating. I make lots of friends from all over the country, even some international students. We learn each other's culture, share our happiness and sorrow. In my spare time, I often take part in various clubs with friends.Campus provides not only valuable job opportunity but also invaluable friendship. 

People attend college to search for knowledge. With guides of experience tutor, students learn system knowledge in their major in high efficacy. Besides, they also develop personal capabilities. For example, they learn how to analyze a problem, how to find a solution and how express their view. College and university education promote people’s capability as well as tradition knowledge . 

In conclusion, attending college or university provides opportunity to promising job, fascinating life experience and development of knowledge and skill

xiaolongxia

早上写的，用时45分，超时好多怎么办？还有字数也才293，同学们给出宝贵意见

xiaolongxia

大家给点意见吧，我很快就要考了，10号的

betterfuture

字数好说，先练4、5天，每天一篇，别刻意注重表达用词，说出来就行，字数应该可以在规定时间轻松达到300，之后在开始琢磨表达和用词。先把字数提升上来可能效率会高一些

xiaolongxia

谢谢

xiaolongxia

还有我总是超时，一般50分钟才写出来，请教

xiaoyuer0123

快找不到了，帮你顶一下，我的意见还是多加练习吧，加油

xiaolongxia

谢谢大家给的建议，我会努力的