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发表于 2006-11-24 10:13:00 | 只看该作者

TWE145

Nowadays, there is a general debate over the topic what advertisements bring us. A considerable proportion of people believe that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. However, others oppose that viewpoint; they argue that advertisements give us introductions of new products that may improve our lives. Facing the problem, I would probably vote for the latter opinion. Among the countless reasons or facts that can strengthen my standpoint, I will present the most consequential and conspicuous ones here.

 

First of all, no issue is more essential than the fact that, with the help of advertisements, up-to-date products will be introduced to us quickly. For instance, one will hardly know what a new type of computer is, which may be more useful and suitable for him, if he hasn't seen its advertisement. Similarly, some extraordinarily useful products will seldom be known by citizens without the help of advertisements.

 

Furthermore, behind my preference lies an equally crucial fact that advertisements, in most cases, are excellent guides when we are confronted with a numerous kinds of products and have no ideas regarding what to choose. Take my own experience for example. When I was considering buying a MP3, there are various types in the shopping center. For me, it is quite a tough job to tell which one is the best or at least, better. While walking in the shopping center, I had a glance at an ipod advertisement. It is so absorbing that I was convinced to buy an ipod. Now, it proves to be true that it is of greatly high quality as it is said in the advertisement.

 

Superior as it is, advertisements also have some demerits. For example, it sometimes encourages us to buy things we do not need, as many people argue. Nevertheless, its advantages carry more weight than that of its disadvantages.

 

To sum up, given the reasons and facts discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that the advertisement is instrumental, rather than detrimental, to our lives, for its introductive functions. What's more, it is also a fine guide when we are choosing some products we don't know much about. In fact, I prefer to watch or read some advertisements before shopping, and usually buy some splendid products introduced in the ads.

沙发
发表于 2006-11-24 10:27:00 | 只看该作者
MM,我觉得写文章提高不在数量,而在总结好文章的结构和连贯性,整篇文章的粘合度,然后将它们转换成自己的东西。TWE的准备不需要花太多的时间。
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2006-11-24 12:54:00 | 只看该作者

12.3 北外的IBT.从上周六开始正式进入复习状态的.保持每天一篇,正在熟悉模板.

现在的问题是,不知道写些什么内容.总觉得没什么话好说.

地板
发表于 2006-11-24 13:21:00 | 只看该作者
多看看好的文章。多总结吧。
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-11-25 10:02:00 | 只看该作者
说实话,笑来的那本上的文章都看不太上眼.谁能告诉我真正的5分作文是什么样子的呀?
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发表于 2006-11-27 21:46:00 | 只看该作者
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