求助GWD-30-5

aborigin

GWD30-Q5:

Citing the recent increase in earnings by several computer companies, economists feel that a cycle has begun in which personal computer users, especially corporate consumers, are replacing their PC’s with more powerful models.

 

1. a cycle has begun in which personal computer users
2. a cycle for personal computer users has begun in which they
3. there is a cycle beginning for personal computer users
4. it is the beginning of a cycle for personal computer users
5. personal computer users are in the beginning of a cycle when they

Key：A，但我感觉A中in which 应该是修饰a cycle的吧，那么它们之间距离是不是有点远了。E选项的错误，请NN指点一下
Many Thanks

aborigin

顶

mymengming

A的修饰语太长了，所以后置，这是可以的

mymengming

personal computer users are in the beginning of a cycle when they

in the beginning of a cycle 不是一个时间的概念，所以不能用when来修饰

aborigin

非常感谢！！！！！！

sendme

mymengming  is right.

补充一点：

E distorts the meaning of the original sentence.

A emphsize the circle begun..

gonghao

以下是引用mymengming在2006-10-29 22:56:00的发言：
A的修饰语太长了，所以后置，这是可以的

that's the answer.

很多的句子中的主语有很多的很长的修饰词或者句

在杨鹏难句中有很多的句子都是将修饰词后置

A是最好的答案

linpeitzu

弱弱的問一下
E選項中personal computer users are in the begining of a cycle...
可以這樣用嗎?
Be V左右不是應該要對秤嗎
這樣用是OK的嗎?

Bill06

刚才说错话了，啥都没说。。。

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-11-20 12:07:31编辑过]

chang2301

請問一下為什麼不能選B呢

B中對a cycle有進一步的解釋a cycle for personal computer users

我覺得這樣的句意比較清楚啊

A的a cycle has begum可能會有人不知道這個cycle 是指什麼

請各位幫忙啦