Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over north America,
they are named for the New Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.
A. Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over north America, they are named for the New Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.
B. Although named for the New Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, Clovis points are spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces and have been found all over north America .
C. Named for the New Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932, Clovis points, spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto the faces, have been found all over north America .
D. Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are chipped onto the faces ,Clovis points , even though named for the New Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, but were found all over north America .
E. While Clovis points are spear points whose faces have longitudinal grooves chipped into them, they have been found all over north America, and named for the New Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932
我觉得楼上的NN说的都对,的确BCDE都存在很大的问题,但是我想请问的是,难道就没有人对于A中的THEY指代提出疑问吗?
如果你说后两个they指代的是clovis points,也就算了,代词优先指代主句主语,但是第一个在插入语中的their,我实在是觉得它存在的指代不清的嫌疑,难道我想错了吗?
-- by 会员 grape262001 (2009/2/1 20:59:00)