ChaseDream
搜索
返回列表 发新帖
查看: 1555|回复: 6
打印 上一主题 下一主题

DELTA TEST 1 里写作的综合部分,欢迎大家来骂

[复制链接]
楼主
发表于 2006-9-11 11:11:00 | 只看该作者

DELTA TEST 1 里写作的综合部分,欢迎大家来骂

DELTA TEST 1里面的INTEGRATED WRITING,按照时间写出来的.题目我就不给出了,看过做过DELTA的人应该都知道.

欢迎大家来骂吧

Humans have always traveled around the world, but the purposes differ a lot between long long ago and nowadays.To some extent, reading material holds the same opinion with the what the professor said in the listening.

The lecturer suggested that centuries ago, travel was not very popular. Only few people, such as the authorities or the rich, could travel.They traveled mostly for two reasons: political or economical. Travel, in that period, was considered a venture not a pleasure. Here he quoted Hemingway as an example, he liked to go hunting in the wild, and do something really adventurous that others could not afford. This kind of experiment influenced his writing, which until now, is also very popular.

Centuries later, nowadays, travel is considered seaching for entertainment and gaining personal experience. Now people like to make a distant destination and enjoy its different culture.So many people prefer to spending their holiday in a small town or a small village, living with local people.

There are many kind of travel now, the lecturer cited two as examples. One is athletic travel. They travled for the lost dancing, ceremonies, songs, and other elements in some old culture. The other is called enviromental travel, most travelers involved would be the scientist. They travel deep to the forest or the African jungle for some scientific studies. They observe the plants and animals for one aim of learning the nature.


[此贴子已经被作者于2006-9-11 11:13:05编辑过]
沙发
发表于 2006-9-11 11:24:00 | 只看该作者

我不怕得罪人,我感觉不太好。第一句话就太过口语化了。后面很多话都非常口语形式。

而且对听力材料的理解有偏差。拿第一段来说,海明威根本就不能算是centuries ago,海明威还参加了第一次世界大战。顶多算是上世纪的人。

我认为三段应该是:

Travel for fun and adventure, such as Hemingway

Travel for cultural purposes.

Environmental trip

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2006-9-11 11:28:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用charmant在2006-9-11 11:24:00的发言:

我不怕得罪人,我感觉不太好。第一句话就太过口语化了。后面很多话都非常口语形式。

而且对听力材料的理解有偏差。拿第一段来说,海明威根本就不能算是centuries ago,海明威还参加了第一次世界大战。顶多算是上世纪的人。

我认为三段应该是:

Travel for fun and adventure, such as Hemingway

Travel for cultural purposes.

Environmental trip

很久没碰了,应该比我想象的好,再把TEST2的做了发上来给大家骂

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2006-9-11 13:03:00 | 只看该作者

再看了一次阅读材料,听了一次听力材料,确实发现自己理解有误

感谢豆包斧正

5#
发表于 2006-9-11 18:16:00 | 只看该作者

travle for advanture

for personal growth tourism (ethinic tourism)/go to local people's home, seeing the dancing and ceremonies would be lost.

environmental toursim

希望考试的时候比delta简单

6#
 楼主| 发表于 2006-9-11 18:18:00 | 只看该作者

Delta的难度应该有一点点而且只有一点点高与官方吧,原题听说都有可能

今天晚上再帖两篇来,现在出去上口语了

7#
发表于 2006-9-11 19:21:00 | 只看该作者

test 1 speaking部分的q4/q6难的

您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

Mark一下! 看一下! 顶楼主! 感谢分享! 快速回复:

所属分类: TOEFL / IELTS

正在浏览此版块的会员 ()

手机版|ChaseDream|GMT+8, 2025-8-19 10:56
京公网安备11010202008513号 京ICP证101109号 京ICP备12012021号

ChaseDream 论坛

© 2003-2025 ChaseDream.com. All Rights Reserved.

返回顶部