大全162 一道奇怪的题！

hgconnie

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
                            them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

答案C，我第一遍看选了D，第二遍又定睛一看，觉得每个都差不多，D到底哪里不对？

ABE是不是them指代不好啊？

这题每个选项到底怎么看啊，他的考点在哪里？NN帮忙！！看了以前讨论贴也没有结论哦。

sendme

你的眼也看花了。。

注意红的部分， 人是主语。

C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter apitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world。 

(D)
                Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world

兰的部分， 有被动性的可能。

另外， 原句in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives 是用来修饰illustrations。

此题的要点是通过状语和定语的变幻位子或主语的位子 来折磨我们

有好多此类，，时间定于变为时间状语。例如 大全694，in the last 50 years..

sendme

你的眼也看花了。。

注意红的部分， 人是主语。

C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter apitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world。 

(D)
                Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world

兰的部分， 有被动性的可能。

另外， 原句in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives 是用来修饰illustrations。

此题的要点是通过状语和定语的变幻位子或主语的位子 来折磨我们

有好多此类，，时间定于变为时间状语。例如 大全694，in the last 50 years..

sendme

另外， 经过我长达4个小时的研究， 定位于XY13,

那里有没有统一的XY13的问题回答。。

hgconnie

明白了，MMD，最近太用功读书，真是看花了眼。。。呜呜。。。

yalemba2007

同问, 哪里有没有统一的XY13的问题回答?

szy733

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cesoir

OG11的官方解释

Logical predication + Rhetorical construction

This sentence awkwardly presents two phrases intended to modify Beatrix Potter and loses the clarity and logic of the meaning. In the original sentence, these modifiers sound choppy and create too much separation between the subject, Beatrix Potter, and the verb capitalized. Beginning the sentence with
        in her book illustrations and following that phrase with the relative clause which she carefully coordinated with her narratives allows the subject, Beatrix Potter, to be united with the verb, capitalized, for a stronger main clause.

A       The modifying elements are poorly placed and leave the subject too far from the verb

B        Phrase carefully coordinating ... illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it
        (book illustrations); Potter, not the illustrations, did the coordinating; awkward and unclear

C       Correct. The correct placement of the modifying elements makes this sentence easier to understand; the use of which clearly links the two elements.

D          Carefully coordinated ... absurdly modifies Beatrix Potter rather than her illustrations

E          Them cannot refer to book illustrations because the plural noun is the object of the preposition in; the relationships among the parts of the sentence are unclear

The correct answer is C.

chenbinqing