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[原创]MBA申请日记(2006-2007)(1、我使这样分析Essays的------)

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楼主
发表于 2006-8-24 17:19:00 | 只看该作者

[原创]MBA申请日记(2006-2007)(1、我使这样分析Essays的------)

先在此开个贴,与大家分享申请信息和心得。

附第一轮申请截止日期:
Oct. 11: Columbia
Oct. 12: Penn / Wharton
Oct. 18: Chicago
Oct. 20: Northwestern / Kellogg
Nov. 1: Duke / Fuqua
Nov. 1: Michigan / Ross

申请第一轮第一所学校Essays:

Ross Essay Questions

Respond to the three required essay questions, typed on separate sheets. Please limit yourself to the number of words noted, using a minimum of 11 point font with 1.5 line spacing.

Required Questions

You must answer all parts of the three questions below.

1. We believe one of the keys to effective leadership is the ability to transform ideas into action. Describe a time within the last three years in which you exercised such leadership. What did you learn about your leadership strengths and development needs?

2. What are your career goals? How will a Ross MBA help you achieve your goals? How might the action-based learning aspects of the Ross curriculum make a difference?

3. Describe the initiatives you have taken over the past two years to develop professionally and personally. What motivated you to take those initiatives?

Optional Question
Is there anything else you think the Admissions Committee should know about you to evaluate your candidacy? (500-word maximum)

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-24 22:08:00 | 只看该作者

先从Ross MBA No.2 Essay开始.

What are your career goals? How will a Ross MBA help you achieve your goals? How might the action-based learning aspects of the Ross curriculum make a difference? (500-word maximum)

题目结构:

1)What are your career goals? == What do you want to do after your MBA

why need an MBA? Why now? And where the MBA will lead you into the future?

2)How will a Ross MBA help you achieve your goals?
   
(Why MBA? Why Ross?)

以上中,特别注意:why MBA is clear? Your future goals are clear??? 毕竟admission officers是专家哦,他们一眼就能看出你是否真的需要一个MBA?你的事业计划是否清晰!

3)How might the action-based learning aspects of the Ross curriculum make a difference?

Do homework about Ross. What do you want to take advantage of the action-based learning aspects of the Ross curriculum?

4) 与去年相比,这次Ross去掉了最后一问:How will you enhance the experience of other members of the Ross community? 但是字数还是限制在500字。

难点:500字,需要写出一个unique story including career goals, why MBA, Why Now, why Ross, how to take advantage of the action-based learning aspects???

以下引用一专家观点:about career goal essay, the school will be looking for clearly and fully defined long- and short-term career goals, your reasons for pursuing an MBA and for opting to do so at this point in time, and your specific interest in School X and your plans to contribute to the campus community, if admitted.


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板凳
发表于 2006-8-24 22:26:00 | 只看该作者

正好我也在分析,一起来看看.

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-24 22:50:00 | 只看该作者

分享一个Chicago Current MBA (i_will_make_it )博客文章,部分节选:

So "Why B-school?" Everyone needs to discover this for oneself, because our answers will probably be different. For myself, I believe the following:

  1. Academics: To learn finance and accounting - to be able to speak the language of business. To gain an understanding of the "big picture" through operations, HR, marketing, org behavior, etc.
  2. Career: To add more value to my company through marketing. To step beyond my engineering mind and utilize my creativity with the challenge of product/brand management.
  3. People: To increase my network with my classmates and alumni. To build lifelong friendships and partnerships.
  4. New Opportunities: To open more doors with recruiters for greater job opportunities and growth. To explore new areas that may bring out other interests or lead me down another job path - who knows?
  5. Self Confidence: To train myself how to interact with a diverse pool of individuals and how to interview (and market myself) effectively under pressure.
  6. Giving Back: To continue my social responsibility of giving back to my community - through student clubs, as an alumni, etc.
  7. Respect: To gain respect through the higher reputation and status that having an MBA brings. Just being honest here. :-) At a conference in 2002, a Marshall alum began his speech humorously:

    "The reason I went to business school was because I thought it would be really cool to have my name read 'Jerry Lin*, M.B.A.' on my business card. It wasn't until after I graduated that I found out we don't put 'M.B.A.' after our names, like the J.D.'s and M.D.'s do. I felt gyped!"

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发表于 2006-8-24 22:58:00 | 只看该作者

搂主可不可以分享一下分析 columbia的essay的?

6#
发表于 2006-8-24 23:00:00 | 只看该作者

 Ross的essay

第一题,自己的分析

要体现Leadership方面事例中:initiate your ideas , put in practice , how to do(face problems, how analysis/realize ), how about the result , what do you learn from this process

第二题,自己的分析

why mba? your clear career goal, path, personal dream , why this school, its specific aspects(activity, club, class) in program, and  you contribute what  to school

在提到specific aspects,要强调action-based learning aspects of the Ross curriculum的作用.

第三题,自己的分析

体现你过去2年的成长经历;在这个过程中,每个阶段你的思考和动机,将这个过程要刻画的非常细致.

第四题,既然是option,那就用来balance整个package.

前三题可以看出Ross特别关注initiate精神,它希望你去了解它的课程的特点,真正了解它的program.


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7#
发表于 2006-8-24 23:09:00 | 只看该作者

Columbia的essay


1. What are your short-term and long-term post-MBA goals? How will Columbia   Business
    
School help you achieve these goals? (recommended 1000 word limit)

 2. Leading in the global economy requires enabling high performance from a diverse set of employees, colleagues and partners. Tell us about a manager you’ve observed who enabled or inspired others to do their best work and analyze how this manager did it. (Recommended 500 word limit)*

2. What personal value means the most to you and why? (Recommended 300 word limit)


3. In discussing
Columbia   Business
   
School, Dean R. Glenn Hubbard remarked, "We have established the mind-set that entrepreneurship is about everything you do." Please discuss a time in your own life when you have identified and captured an opportunity. (recommended 500 word limit)


4. Please select and answer one of the following essay questions. (250)
a. Please tell us what you feel most passionate about in life.
b. If you were given a free day and could spend it anywhere, in any way you choose, what would you do?


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 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-24 23:10:00 | 只看该作者

分享一个Ross Current MBA (Arwen - The Elven Princess )博客文章,部分节选:

Grab Bag of Tips for Applicants

Here's something I put together for someone who is applying to B School this year. Hopefully, it will be useful to a few others as well.

Preliminary Research
Understand what an MBA can mean in terms of the input (commitment) and output (possibilities). Evaluate post MBA career options and determine if they meet your interests and long term plans. It is not about just getting into the right school - it is about getting into the right school to get on the right career track.

Pluck the low lying fruit
Get done with that GMAT test - it really is the easiest part of the application. Pick up GMAT books and brush up your math skills, you will soon find yourself scoring in a consistent band of +/- 20 points. You can increase the score by atleast 50 points if you can analyze your scores, identify your weak areas and put in some hard hard work. It is good to be visiting GMAT related forums at this point.

Detailed Research
Look through the various rankings. Think of schools to lie in the following categories - Super Elite, Elite, 15 to 25 bracket or the Tier II and 25 to 50 bracket or the Tier III.
- Pick a career path and then pick schools. If you are interested in a career in A, I think it is risky to do it in a school known the world over for careers in B. The company you are interested in may not recruit at the school. You may not find enough folks to help you with the networking.
- Make a list of all things that is important for you. For instance, the demographics of the location is important to me. I come from a country with a billion people and living in a town with just 10,000 folks would be traumatic !! I place a premium on the school's website and tech-savy nature. For me, that is a sign of how the school can connect me with the world. A collaborative environment is also important for me.
- The first thing that you should look for when evaluating schools is the employment statistics. You should know what % of class is employed at graduation, what % is employed through school activities, what % is placed in the industry/function of your choice, what companies recruit for the industry/function of your choice. It is important that the entire class is placed well - that is how you build a network. Next, look at the academics and the faculty. For me, more practical the training the better. Thirdly, look at the strength of the community feeling. Mail current students and counselors and see the response. Remember to look at the tuition and loan options.

It is good to start visiting the various B School forums at this point.

Put down your Story
First, make a two-page resume. Delete all the industry jargon and ensure the points are more action-result based. Next, put down one page responses to the following questions
- What are your career goals for 5 years from now and 20 years from now ?
- Why MBA? Why now ?
- Two career related accomplishments
- One instance of failure and what you learnt from that failure
- One non career related accomplishment
- An ethical dilemma.

Understand the application process
Your GMAT scores, acads, work experience and how you present yourself in your essays and interviews will determine if you get selected. There are rules to how a short coming in one aspect can be overcome in another aspect of your application. You could get away with slightly below average acads if you have exemplary work experience but the reverse is unlikely to be true. You could get away with a slightly below average GMAT score if you have some truly unique stories to tell - again the reverse may not be true.

Understand your strengths and weakness. Understand the pool in which you are applying. There will be more then one applicant with the same or higher GMAT score, work experience and acads, the only differentiating factor is your story. Nothing can compensate for weak essays.

Essay Writing
Shortlist the schools and estimate your chances at each of the schools. Applying to more then 4 schools is tough on you and the people who will write your recommendation letters. Look through resources available at sites such as ClearAdmit for tips on essay writing. Always remember that the adcom does not want to hear any one story - they want to hear a different story. Build on the stories you put down earlier - mould them to answer the question asked.

Planning and Applying
I would recommend starting your preparations atleast a year before you plan to apply. Spread your applications over round1 and round2. This gives you time to apply to your backup colleges - in case your college of first choice gave you the ding or puts you on the waitlist.

And hey, this is just my perspective. Good luck with the applications.
9#
发表于 2006-8-24 23:11:00 | 只看该作者
你都是申请第一轮,时间能赶得及吗,建议几个放在第二轮。
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-24 23:19:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用vanessav在2006-8-24 22:58:00的发言:

搂主可不可以分享一下分析 columbia的essay的?

To:vanessav:我还没有开始看columbia的essay。如果开始写的话,一定与大家分享思路。

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