[求助]GWD26-30

minizheng

30.

For many revisionist historians, Christopher Columbus has come to

Personify devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that

Has decimated native peoples of the Western Hemisphere.

A.     devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that

has decimated native peoples of the Western Hemisphere

B.     devastation and enslavement in the name of progress by

which native peoples of the Western Hemisphere have been

decimated

C.     devastating and enslaving in the name of progress those native

peoples of the Western Hemisphere that have been decimated

D.     devastating and enslaving those native peoples of the Western

hemisphere which in the name of progress are decimated.

E.      the devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that

have decimated the native peoples of the Western Hemisphere.

Answer:A

根本不知道怎么做

carolhide

B 擅自改被动，咔嚓

C run-on句子,而且结构混乱，that修饰的对象也改变

D 同上

E have错，主谓一致问题

minizheng

解释得很清楚啊，多谢拉~

B 里面主动改称被动也算擅自改动阿？

carolhide

要根据原句的，如果原句是主动，那只有在所有主动选项都错误的情况下才考虑被动选项，因为改变主被动是会改变句子重心的，得避免。

minizheng

明白了，宝贵的一课，bow

xiangqinzh

找到了原话,好象还是选A呢 

In the furious debate that has

anticipated the anniversary, Columbus fans have been almost

drowned out by the rising voices of more native Americans and

others for whom he has come to personify devastation and

enslavement in the name of progress.

http://www.millersville.edu/~columbus/data/art/GOLDEN01.ART