請教OG11-8

gshen

Rising inventories,
            when unaccompanied correspondingly
            by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth.

(A)         when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead

(B)         when not accompanied by corresponding

increases in sales, possibly leads

(C)        when they were unaccompanied by

corresponding sales increases, can lead

(D)        if not accompanied by correspondingly increased

sales, possibly leads

(E)         if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead

答案是E，但我對OG解釋未能吃透，問題如下：

關於D的解釋

The adverb correspondingly is incorrectly and ambiguously used; using the adjective corresponding to modify increases in sales makes the intended meaning more clear.

Correspondingly increased sales is awkward and unclear

我查過longman，correspondingly並沒有別於corresponding的意思阿，請各位大大幫忙討論一下

此外，想請問，用法上是increased sales對還是increasing sales對，根據字典，應該是increasing sales及increased demand這樣的用法

roric

以下是引用gshen在2006-7-11 20:17:00的发言：

Rising inventories,
   when unaccompanied correspondingly
   by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth.

(A)         when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead

(B)         when not accompanied by corresponding

increases in sales, possibly leads

(C)        when they were unaccompanied by

corresponding sales increases, can lead

(D)        if not accompanied by correspondingly increased

sales, possibly leads

(E)         if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead

答案是E，但我對OG解釋未能吃透，問題如下：

關於D的解釋

The adverb correspondingly is incorrectly and ambiguously used; using the adjective corresponding to modify increases in sales makes the intended meaning more clear.

Correspondingly increased sales is awkward and unclear

我查過longman，correspondingly並沒有別於corresponding的意思阿，請各位大大幫忙討論一下

correspondingly 是corresponding的副词

此外，想請問，用法上是increased sales對還是increasing sales對，根據字典，應該是increasing sales及increased demand這樣的用法

在google上increased sales也是正确的用法,只是表不同的状态

roric

我的问题是：在A选项中CORRESPONDINGLY是不是去修饰了UNANCOOMPANIED，而应该修INCREASED,所以OG说AMBIGUOUS ?

yaomao

支持你的看法

charlie6989

    我覺的correspondingly 在OG上會說AMBIGUOUS
是因為會造成修飾unaccompanied 和 increases in sales 修飾的歧義

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-8-26 21:50:38编辑过]

iamwuyan

以前有帖子讨论过的, 楼主可以找找看, 好像是因为本题中伴随强调的应该是INCREASE而不是INCREASED SALES

diawpfm

根据题目的意思，“相应的”（correspondingly）本应该修饰的是increases in sales,

但是这里的“相应的”却用副词correspondingly，副词是不能修饰名词increases，它修饰的是unaccompanied,

这个属于逻辑修饰错误。

故应该改为corresponding.

phyroc

OG说D选项中"Correspondingly increased sales is awkward and unclear", 没有看懂，望NN解惑，谢谢

Jmelon

以下是引用phyroc在2008-10-1 11:31:00的发言：
OG说D选项中"Correspondingly increased sales is awkward and unclear", 没有看懂，望NN解惑，谢谢

顶上~同样的问题 希望各位帮忙解答下阿