模考软件和OG一题对比

amber0919

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这里的B的while introducing ... 是省略形式. 逻辑主语是前面的methods    当时没敢选,记得OG有一题说是不完整的形式. 就是下面这题.  

31. Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.

(A)  Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, there is a disinclination on the part of many people to recognize the degree to which their analytical skills are weak.

(B)  Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, which they admit they lack, many people are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.

(C)  Unlike computer skills or other technical skills, analytical skills bring out a disinclination in many people to recognize that they are weak to a degree.

(D)  Many people, willing to admit that they lack computer skills or other technical skills, are disinclined to recognize that their analytical skills are weak.

(E)   Many people have a disinclination to recognize the weakness of their analytical skills while willing to admit their lack of computer skills or other technical skills.

 

 

In E, have a disinclination... while willing is grammatically incomplete

这是怎么回事啊?

另: 我觉得C的which have 指代没有问题..指pollutants.  因为time是单数,  根据have , 不可能指这个单数.. 跳跃指pollutants..  是可以接受的. OG上也有这样的.

那C错在什么地方呢?

行缘

试着解释一下：

软件题中: while at the same time introducing中的while引导是时间状从，"当...时候"的意思，这中情况下，while doing是允许的；

OG31中E,while willing, 转折状从，在这中情况下，while doing是否可以(尤其是主语的谓语和while状从不一致的情况,如OG31-E）好象至今没见NN们给个定论；而且，OG31中E的willing是adj,不是doing的形式，while+adj(表转折)可以吗？我还不确定；

再说软件题中的C,一个重要的flaw就是at the same time的位置造成的歧义，给人感觉100000个plutants是at the sametime introduced.

个人感觉，欢迎探讨。

amber0919

恩．while doing 表示时间状语是可以的．我搞错了．

at the same times的位置问题还不不太懂．　偶觉得没啥歧义捏？

司香尉

这题还挺难的啊，

请问A为什么不对？因为这个having可以修饰they,也可以修饰pollutants吗？

歧义：本来应该是指introduce和improve同时发生的，现在变成了，同时介绍这1000个pollutants.

还有我想问问while后面可以用现在完成时吗？

amber0919

having放句尾逻辑主语是句子主语. 关于while能否加完成时,我不太确定 等牛牛来回答吧.

mymengming

省略是这样的，所以是错的。

Many people have a disinclination …… while （they have）willing to，

其实应该是Many people have a disinclination …… while （they are）willing to

由于谓语不一致所以不能省略的。

C，在that从句中的they应该优先指代recognize的动作发出者，因为that从句是动词recognize的宾语。当然，硬要按主语优先的原则来说，也可以指代analytical skiils。但是，这类错误不是绝对错误，只能是相对错误。
OG11 通常这样的代词，都不对，因为不清楚it指代什么。但是，当这种代词指代主句主语的时候，可以接受。

 

觉得C比D有两个不好（1）c的recognize的动作发出者不明显，从逻辑意思上看是people从结构上看是disinclination.(2)在逻辑意思合理的情况下尽量用动词而不用它的名词形式。bring out disclination不如disclined生动、直接、合理（E也是同样的）。

希望MM能满意这个回答