讨论GWD17-20

keita

Construction of the Roman Colosseum, which was officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater, began in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian, was completed a decade later, during the reign of Titus, who opened the Colosseum with a one-hundred-day cycle of religious pageants, gladiatorial games, and spectacles.

A which was officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater, began in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian,
B officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater, begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian, and
C which was officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater, began in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian, and
D officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater and begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian it
E officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater, which was begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian, and

给的答案是C

如果是为了使which was officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater and was completed a decade later 平行

那 began in A.D. 69 在中间很奇怪~

感觉E比较好~ 但是不确定~

大家来讨论呀~~

gonghao

Construction of the Roman Colosseum,which was officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater,
    began in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian, and was completed a decade later, during the reign
    of Titus, who opened the Colosseum with a one-hundred-day cycle of religious pageants, gladiatorial games, and spectacles

gonghao

E officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater, which was begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian, and
前面的结构就是【Construction of the Roman Colosseum主语】+【officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater修饰结构】+【which was begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian修饰结构】后面用逗号连接一个没有主语的动词组【was completed a decade later】

错误

gonghao

这里的

began and was completed ，。当中插入了两个时间的同谓语

gonghao

不过我对于C还是有点不满意，

began的用法：【建筑+began】这样的主动状态和后面的被动的形式并列，看的不大爽，

keita

那也就是说began in A.D. 69和was completed a decade later 在这里并列

做这个句子的谓语对吗?

那么Ｅ中假如was completed a decade later要和前面的which was begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian　并列　是不是要在前面加which??

keita

B 为什么不可以

officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater可以做为一个插入成分 修饰the Roman Colosseum

C就是多了一个Which was

一定要变成一个从句修饰前面的the Roman Colosseum才可以吗?

gonghao

B officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater, begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian, and

begun是过去分词，所以不对，

因为如果是过去分词的话，就又变成修饰结构了，且officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater也是修饰结构了，这样就变成：主语+修饰+修饰+逗号+动词。这样逗号前的句子就没谓语了。

所以我觉的B还是错误的。

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那也就是说began in A.D. 69和was completed a decade later 在这里并列

做这个句子的谓语对吗?

--------我感觉是这样的，否则整个句子没有谓语了，只能这样理解

那么Ｅ中假如was completed a decade later要和前面的which was begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian　并列　是不是要在前面加which??

--------我感觉这样的并列是不正确的，两个定语从句的并列，如果连续的话，会导致引导词的位置的原因而造成就近修饰，一般，都要调整次序，将主语置中间，一个从句化为分词放举手，另一个定从置后，这样才不会造成就近修饰造成歧异。

且就算你这样的并列成立，这样的结构还是不正确，因为如果是这样并列的话，证据句子，除了主语就都是修饰成分，没有谓语，还是不正确的

keita

谢谢gonghao gg

解释的很清楚~~

candypolo

以下是引用gonghao在2006-5-20 19:43:00的发言：
Construction of the Roman Colosseum,which was officially known as the Flavian Amphitheater,
 began in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian, and was completed a decade later, during the reign
 of Titus, who opened the Colosseum with a one-hundred-day cycle of religious pageants, gladiatorial games, and spectacles

还是不明白，同一个主语，怎么能同时主动和被动谓语动词并列呢？看了半天觉得都不是很合理，还请高人解释这个并列问题！