GWD 12-31,key is E,but i think A more perfect

tanwt

Q31:

Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering

Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886and outnumbering

Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering

Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

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if E,would change the original meaning of the sentence.?

米可可

为什么这题没人讨论过，我也觉得A没有什么语法问题，反而E有改变句子重心嫌疑。NN们指教一下。

静远

我也觉得A对，A没有语法错误，但E如LZ说的改变了原意了阿？

hyang08

同问同问，召唤NN

hanheli

嗯，A和E的重点的确不一样。答案没有错么？

uustar

A中outnumbering放句尾有修饰整个句子之嫌。