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祈晴坊主

以下是引用xianwharton在2003-9-21 15:09:00的发言：
请问介词短语可以修饰名词吗？
eg：205. The peaks of a mountain range, acting like rocks in a streambed, produce ripples in the air flowing over them; the resulting flow pattern, with crests and troughs that remain stationary although the air that forms them is moving rapidly, are known as "standing waves."
  with crests and troughs that remain stationary 是不是就是做patten的定语。

不是
是PATTEN的伴随状语

祈晴坊主

以下是引用xianwharton在2003-9-21 15:56:00的发言：
og 194
194. Presenters at the seminar, one who is blind, will
demonstrate adaptive equipment that allows visually impaired people to use computers.
(A) one who
(B) one of them who
(C) and one of them who
(D) one of whom
(E) one of which
The subject, presenters, must be followed by a limiting appositive _ such as one of whom, that identifies an individual from among a larger group. Choice D is best: one of whom best serves an appositive to the subject, presenters, because the phrase means "one from among several or many." Choice A, one who, is unacceptable because one who cannot refer to the plural presenters. Choices B and C are ungrammatical because who competes with one as the subject of is. Choice E employs which, a relative pronoun that does not refer to people (presenters), but only to things.
如果按题中所说one 是is 的主语，那次就不是fragment 了吗？有两个句子one is blind和parents will......

主语不是one
one of whom是定语从句
真正的主语的presenters,Choice D is best: one of whom best serves an appositive to the subject, presenters, because the phrase means "

祈晴坊主

以下是引用liflyy在2003-9-22 11:04:00的发言：

  
7. Since the 1930's aircraft manufacturers have tried to
build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped so
smoothly and perfectly that the air passing over
them would not become turbulent.

(A) wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly
(B) wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped
(C) wings that are shaped so smooth and perfect
(D) wings, shaped in such a smooth and perfect manner
(E) wings, wings having been shaped smoothly and
perfectly so
D 为什么不对

D缺少逻辑主语
会引起歧义,到底是修饰planes  还是wings

祈晴坊主

以下是引用liflyy在2003-9-22 11:04:00的发言：

  
7. Since the 1930's aircraft manufacturers have tried to
build airplanes with frictionless wings, shaped so
smoothly and perfectly that the air passing over
them would not become turbulent.

(A) wings, shaped so smoothly and perfectly
(B) wings, wings so smooth and so perfectly shaped
(C) wings that are shaped so smooth and perfect
(D) wings, shaped in such a smooth and perfect manner
(E) wings, wings having been shaped smoothly and
perfectly so
D 为什么不对

D缺少逻辑主语
会引起歧义,到底是修饰planes  还是wings

祈晴坊主

以下是引用liflyy在2003-9-22 14:38:00的发言：
23. a huge flying reptile that died out with the dinosaurs some 65 million years ago, the Quetzalcoatlus had a wingspan of 36 feet, believed to be the largest flying creature the world has ever seen.
(A) believed to be
(B) and that is believed to be
(C) and it is believed to have been
(D) which was, it is believed,
(E) which is believed to be

A为何不对

GG
先给你提个意见好吗
以后把正确答案也贴出来吧,因为GMAT没有绝对的语法原则,不能绝对的说哪个错哪个对,答案通常都是比出来的

关于这个问题,我觉得和前面那题一样,你没有搞清出逻辑主语的关系
就象这道题目,believed to be 可以用来修饰flying reptile或dinosaurs
所以要加上个逻辑主语,才避免歧义

祈晴坊主

以下是引用liflyy在2003-9-22 14:38:00的发言：

19. In addition to having more protein than wheat does, the protein in rice is higher quality than that in wheat, with more of the amino acids essential to the human diet.
(A) the protein in rice is proteinthan that in
(B) rice has protein of higher quality than that in
(C) the protein in rice is higher in quality than it is in
(D) rice protein is higher in quality than it is in
(E) rice has a protein higher in quality than

A为何不对

A有明显的错误,protein和higher quality 都是名词
后面的THAT到底指什么呢
比较结构没有对称啊

xianwharton

以下是引用祈晴坊主在2003-9-22 19:42:00的发言：

不是
是PATTEN的伴随状语

可patten是名词啊

joice

以下是引用liflyy在2003-9-22 14:37:00的发言：

可是我还是不知道D为什么不对，多谢先：）

tell me which one you chose?

祈晴坊主

14.    After July, anyone disposing of or servicing refrigerators must capture the chlorofluorocarbons in the refrigerant chemicals.
(A) anyone disposing of or servicing
(B) those who dispose or service
(C) anyone disposing of or who services
(D) the disposal or repair of
(E) someone who disposes or repairs


我觉得A的结构有问题的
servicing refrigerators是什么意思啊
为什么选A啊

祈晴坊主

6.    Within the boundaries of artistic rivalry lies a sense of family: the shared genetic inheritance, or accident, that enables musicians to make music.
(A) Within the boundaries of artistic rivalry lies a sense of family
(B) Within the boundaries of artistic rivalry lays a sense of family
(C) A sense of family lies inside of the boundaries of artistic rivalry
(D) A family sense lies within artistic rivalry’s boundaries
(E) Within artistic rivalry’s boundaries lays a family sense

答案选A
我选D
我想问，the shared genetic inheritance, or accident到底是the boundaries of artistic rivalry 还是sense of family的同位语