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祈晴坊主

以下是引用felix2816在2003-10-5 12:36:00的发言：
885 section E, the most diffcult question:
9.It takes a deft balance between savings discipline, investment knowledge, risk taking, luck, and time to raise a million dollars through investments.
(A) It takes a deft balance between
(B) Deft balancing is needed between
(C) Deftly balanced, it takes
(D) It takes a deft balance of
(E) A deft balance is what one needs among

I choose E, the right answer is D, who can explain it? if you can translate this stence, I will furtherly appreciate it.

首先，E的选项明显有点wordy and awkward
what one needs 指什么没有明确的对象

而D,用了it形式主语
表示要投资赚钱的话，需要在这些savings discipline, investment knowledge~~~~等等中间，有一个灵巧的平衡

祈晴坊主

post my questions again:



During the 1980s it became clear that soliciting private funds was far more efficient for environmentalists who sought financial aid than to go to state or federal agencies.
(A) that soliciting private funds was far more efficient for environmentalists who sought financial aid
(B) that for environmentalists who sought financial aid, it was far more efficient to solicit private funds
(C) that for environmentalists seeking financial aid, private organizations were far more efficient to go to
(D) for environmentalists seeking financial aid, going to private organizations was far more efficient
(E) for environmentalists who sought financial aid, private organizations were far more efficient
答案选B，但是我觉得B中前后两个IT
指代的东西明显不同


The rules that govern political contributions are less stringent in local elections than they are in national elections because they typically involve smaller amounts of money and present less opportunity for abuse.
(A) The rules that govern political contributions are less stringent in local elections than they are in national elections because they typically involve smaller amounts of money and present less opportunity for abuse.
(B) Because they typically involve smaller amounts of money and present less opportunity for abuse, the rules that govern political contributions are less stringent in local elections than the rules are less stringent in local elections than the rules are in national elections.
(C) The rules that govern political contributions are less stringent in local elections than national elections because they typically involve smaller amounts of money and present less opportunity for abuse.
(D) Because local elections typically involve smaller amounts of money and present less opportunity for abuse than national elections, the rules that govern local political contributions are less stringent than national contributions.
(E) The rules that govern political contributions are less stringent in local elections than they are in national elections because local elections typically involve smaller amounts of money and present less opportunity for abuse.


答案选E，可是E中前面是the rules in local elections 后面是 in national elections
前后两个rules明显是不一样的
怎么可以用they  替代呢

felix2816

To bobee:
249。
“Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, (whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style,influenced...),also inspired.....。
got it?

60.
it refers to "owning and living in a freestanding house on its own land". "As" is used between the comparativity of sentence.

felix2816

post my questions again:



during the 1980s it became clear that soliciting private funds was far more efficient for environmentalists who sought financial aid than to go to state or federal agencies.
(a) that soliciting private funds was far more efficient for environmentalists who sought financial aid
(b) that for environmentalists who sought financial aid, it was far more efficient to solicit private funds
(c) that for environmentalists seeking financial aid, private organizations were far more efficient to go to
(d) for environmentalists seeking financial aid, going to private organizations was far more efficient
(e) for environmentalists who sought financial aid, private organizations were far more efficient
答案选b，但是我觉得b中前后两个it
指代的东西明显不同

是不同啊！这是两个句子的比较。it是形式主语，than后面省略了第二个it

felix2816

答案选e，可是e中前面是the rules in local elections 后面是 in national elections
前后两个rules明显是不一样的
怎么可以用they  替代呢？

我不认为they必须在含意上也完全一致。they 都是指rules, 没有歧义。
欢迎NNs批评!!

bobee

以下是引用felix2816在2003-10-5 12:36:00的发言：
885 section E, the most diffcult question:
9.It takes a deft balance between savings discipline, investment knowledge, risk taking, luck, and time to raise a million dollars through investments.
(A) It takes a deft balance between
(B) Deft balancing is needed between
(C) Deftly balanced, it takes
(D) It takes a deft balance of
(E) A deft balance is what one needs among

I choose E, the right answer is D, who can explain it? if you can translate this stence, I will furtherly appreciate it.

除了E wordy 之外，这一题的选择是不是要考虑到balance的用法，即balance of 比较常用，而balance between 或balance among 就不是很地道。

bobee

以下是引用felix2816在2003-10-5 12:43:00的发言：
bobee, per you reply. I would say: "it" is a typo of mine.
choice B can be reverted to its original form:" than (people) had anticipated".
hope it helps your understanding.

in this way , maybe "they" is better to refer to "people" than"it":p

bobee

？
坊主，你的解释
“249,那些音乐家的view（on ~~~) influenced ~~~ ,also influenced ~~(whose~~这里的whose修饰的是后面的那些人，而不是只那些音乐家）”

好像和felix地解释
“Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, (whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style,influenced...),also inspired.....。

不是一个看法哦？我觉得felix 的划分比较合理，但是这样句子就是音乐家某某也干了什么什么，我就是觉得那个also别扭

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