请教885题中的 As v.s. Like

yoyo700

Section 2 -10

Like Haydn, Schubert wrote a great deal for the stage, but he is remembered principally for his chamber and concert-hall music.
(A) Like Haydn, Schubert
(B) Like Haydn, Schubert also
(C) As has Haydn, Schubert
(D) As did Haydn, Schubert also
(E) As Haydn did, Schubert also

Answer: A.  My Question: why D, E are wrong?

Section 4- 6

Because young children do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically, like adults, they may notice and remember details that their elders ignore.
(A) like adults
(B) unlike an adult
(C) as adults
(D) as adults do
(E) as an adult

Answer: D, My question: What about A?

OG 267

Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled against the unnatural complexity of human relations in modern society.

a. Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
b. Like Rousseau, Tolstoi's rebellion was
c. As Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
d. As did Rousseau, Tolstoi's rebellion was
e. Tolstoi's rebellion, as Rousseau's, was

This one is much clear...

Thanks in advance!

braveMBA

Section 2 -10：
主要从简洁性上考虑，尽管D、E没有语法错误。但是D、E的表达方式同A比，A优先考虑，且also也显得wordy.

Section 4- 6：
主要是因为young children do not organize，这是一个否定句，如果用like adults，那么意思就可能变成Like adults, young children do not organize, 也就是说adults do not organize，出现了模糊的表达意思。同时like adults放在句子中间也有 dangling 之嫌。而as adults do避免了这个表达模糊性，因为do refers to organize，这是一个肯定的意思。

Hope you make sense!

yoyo700

It's clear. Thank you for your help, Bravemba!

flora_wang

唉,杀时候能象Bravemba那么清楚就好咯...

zcoygmat

我觉得是因为后面有2个动词WROTE和IS,用DID没法平行

tianwan

方式状语不应该提前，会造成歧义（原因，时间），非要提前，则必须用as...,so...句型。

请指正。

aph7

also 跟 LIKE/AS wordy，即可排除

hawkinsxie

以下是引用aph7在2005-11-12 20:43:00的发言：
also 跟 LIKE/AS wordy，即可排除

正解！此外，D和E根本就是一个答案，同对或同错！

xdlei

我也终于清楚了！