探讨GMAT885,Sec C ,22题

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22.Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art and also believed in recycling at home; he once turned a broken goblet into a dinner bell and a cake mold into a lamp.
(A) Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art and also believed in recycling at home; he
(B) Alexander Calder, for whom old pieces of junk was often made into sculpture, believed in recycling at home and
(C) A believer in recycling at home, sculptor Alexander Calder often made use for old pieces of junk in his art; he
(D) Alexander Calder, for whom sculpture was often made from old pieces of junk, also believed in recycling at home, for example, he
(E) Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art, also believed in recycling at home; he

E 是正确答案. 我不明白为什么出现also, who引导定语从句,前面没有其他主句动词了啊? 倘若可用also,D选项若把at home之后的逗号改成分号,也是正确的,对吗?谢谢!

braveMBA

also的出现并不影响语法，其他选项都是不完整的或者run on sentence.

merlion

BRAVE说的对。

同时， D改成MM说的也不和原句句意，不正确。

yzlinlin

D的错误我理解的是for whom 的使用不正确。不知楼上几位所说的句意不正确和句子不完整run on sentence该怎么理解？

高手给个说法？

ryan

还有，C 也只是错在MAKE USE OF 的搭配上吧。没有 run on sentence 啊？

gemj

D中出现的RUN-ON句型。是指一句话出现了两个独立的句子，但却没有恰当的连词或符号来连接。
(Alexander Calder, for whom sculpture was often made from old pieces of junk, also believed in recycling at home,) (for example, he once turned a broken goblet into a dinner bell and a cake mold into a lamp.)

是的C没有出现这种结构。

allaneli

what is the meaning of "make use of sth"

thanks for your help

best555tw

make use of sth利用

evelyndream

想請教兩個問題

1.正確答案E中 不會造成run down sentence嗎?

(E) Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art, also believed in recycling at home; he

這裡he前面不需要一個連接詞來連接兩個句子嗎?

2.請問A哪裡不對? 我個人是覺得A應該比E來的更平衡

謝謝

elle_woo

E中没有出现run-on句型，因为“；”可以连接两个独立的句子

答案A的前半句话Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art and also believed in recycling at home是个独立的分句，应有完整的结构，但逗号后面的都可看作是who引导的定语从句，使得分句没有谓语，不完整。