[讨论]OG11th-8

seasnow

8.             Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth,

(A)    when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead

(B)     when not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, possibly leads

(C)    when they were unaccompanied by corresponding sales increases, can lead

(D)    if not accompanied by correspondingly increased sales, possibly leads

(E)     if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead

选D，平行结构？对吗？

carolhide

8. Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth.

(A)   when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead

(B)   when not accompanied corresponding by increases in sales, possibly leads

(C)   when they were unaccompanied by corresponding sales increases can lead

(D)  if not accompanied by correspondingly increased sales, possibly leads

(E)   if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead

Diction + Logical predication

The modifying phrase when…sales is needlessly difficult to understand. The adverb correspondingly is incorrectly and ambiguously used; using the adjective corresponding to modify increases in sales makes the intended meaning more clear. Unaccompanied is not wrong but not accompanied puts greater emphasis on the negative. When indicates a period of time; if indicates a condition. If is preferable here.

A  Correspondingly is awkward and ambiguous; when is used to refer to a condition

B  lural subject inventories does not agree with the singular verb leads; when is used to refer to a condition

C  ast tense were indicates a complete event, but can lead indicates a possibility that continues; when is used to refer to a condition

D  Correspondingly increased sales is awkward and unclear; verb (leads) does not agree with the subject (inventories)

E  Correct. If properly introduces a condition in this sentence; not accompanied emphasizes the negative; corresponding modifies increases in sales; the modifier is clear and comprehensible.

The correct answer is E.

MM的OG没有解释的？

seasnow

sorry, 我只有题目，是好心的running给我的。

谢谢carolhide mm这么耐心!

这道题E会不会不平行呢？前面是存货，后面的中心词难道不应该是sales与之对应吗？现在中心词变成了increase，感觉不太舒服。

能不能讲讲Correspondingly increased sales和Corresponding increase in sales 有什么本质的区别。记得OG10里面好像有类似的题目，但是一时找不到。

carolhide

(E)  Rising inventories,  if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead

意思是伴随着销售增长的库存，如果把重心放在sales的话就变成伴随着增长销售的库存，这样好象就读不通了。

Correspondingly increased sales和Corresponding increase in sales 有什么本质的区别

Correspondingly increased sales中心词是sales

Corresponding increase in sales 中心词是increase

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以下是引用carolhide在2006-1-16 10:20:00的发言：

(E)  Rising inventories,  if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead

意思是伴随着销售增长的库存，如果把重心放在sales的话就变成伴随着增长销售的库存，这样好象就读不通了。

不明白。 CAROLHIDE 再讲讲吧

carolhide

把修饰部分都去掉说吧

if not accompanied by correspondingly increased sales

这样就变成伴随销售的库存，而愿意是要表达伴随增长的库存。

wycg

8.             Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth,>>

(A)    when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead >>

(B)     when not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, possibly leads>>

(C)    when they were unaccompanied by corresponding sales increases, can lead>>

(D)    if not accompanied by correspondingly increased sales, possibly leads>>

(E)     if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead

A  中的correspondingly从意思上看应该用corresponding.错.E是5个选项中最好的.

swich36

AnimalPlanet

many thanks

gurongqian

为什么说correspondingly的用法不对呢，看不懂？