[求助]12月18日刚考的托福机考，作文内容和结构都还行，但拼错了好多单词，会严重影响得分吗？将考试作文原文录下，请高人指点能得多少分，谢谢了！！！

Flora_2005

12月18日刚考的托福机考，其他部分的得分都还行。但是作文很可能要栽跟头。

作文内容和结构都还行，但拼错了好多单词，全文的“library”都拼成了“liabrary”，这就有十几个之多，另外还有7、8个其他单词的拼写错误。会严重影响得分吗？

两个考官中，人评卷我想问题不会很大，但计算机？估计这个机器没有那么高的智商能看出我那十几个拼写错误其实都是一个单词啊。我冤哪！！！

将考试作文原文录下，请高人指点能得多少分，要是能在５分或以上，我就心满意足了．拜托了！！！

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How to use the large quantity of gift money received by my school is a controversial question.  Different people may have different answers depending on their respective experience.  Some people may think it better to invest such money in building a gym, while some other people may prefer to using the money to construct a library.  As far as I am concerned, I think the money should be imputed in establishing a new library.

The chief and important reason for me to make this choice is that the library is a symbol of a school.  When new students enter into my school or guests visit, a good and important impression will be imprinted in their mind with the beautiful and modern new library in my school.  Thus, this newly established library will help my school to attract more excellent new students and build up a higher reputation.

The second but at least the same important reason for me to select library is that a library is a crucial place for students to learn knowledge in addition to their routine classes.  The library has a huge collection of books, magazines and newspapers.  By reading various sorts of books, the students will no doubt expand their eyesights.  A student majoring in Chemistry can also read a lot of classical literature books, which will help him to make his knowledge structure more complete and balanced.  Therefore, building up a new library will help students to expand their knowledge scope.

The last but not the least reason is that, a new library will provide a good place for students to spend their leisure time.  Some students like to hang around in the library with their friends after classes.  With a newly-established, beautiful library, the students would likely make it the first priority to go to the library rather than going shopping or going to the movies.  Thus, constructing a library will offer a serene place for students to spend their spare time.

Admittedly, spending money on other matters such as gym or students dormitory also have their advantages.  They will help students to build up a strong body or to secure students to have a nice sleep.  However, in my opinion, library carry more weight than that of other matters.  As discussed above, putting up a library will help students to expand their knowledge, offer a good place for students to spend their leisure time, and facilitate my school to build up a higher reputation.  Thus, spending money on a library is quite worthy.  

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pumpkin

很难到5分以上。

Flora_2005

pumpkin，

虽然你的回答让我有些伤心，但还是非常感谢你的回答:-)

谢谢你这样的热心人！！

laihong

How to use the large quantity of gift money received by my school is a controversial question.  Different people may have different answers depending on their respective experience.  Some people may think it better to invest such money in building a gym, while some other people may prefer to using the money to construct a library.  As far as I am concerned, I think the money should be imputed in establishing a new library.>>

>>The chief and important reason for me to make this choice is that the library is a symbol of a school.  When new students enter into my school or guests visit, a good and important impression will be imprinted in their mind with the beautiful and modern new library in my school.  Thus, this newly established library will help my school to attract more excellent new students and build up a higher reputation.>>

>>The second but at least the same important reason for me to select library is that a library is a crucial place for students to learn knowledge in addition to their routine classes.  The library has a huge collection of books, magazines and newspapers.  By reading various sorts of books, the students will no doubt expand their eyesights.  A student majoring in Chemistry can also read a lot of classical literature books, which will help him to make his knowledge structure more complete and balanced.  Therefore, building up a new library will help students to expand their knowledge scope.>>

The last but not the least reason is that, a new library will provide a good place for students to spend their leisure time.  Some students like to hang around in the library with their friends after classes.  With a newly-established, beautiful library, the students would likely make it the first priority to go to the library rather than going shopping or going to the movies.  Thus, constructing a library will offer a serene place for students to spend their spare time.

Admittedly, spending money on other matters such as gym or students dormitory also have their advantages.  They will help students to build up a strong body or to secure students to have a nice sleep.  However, in my opinion, library carry more weight than that of other matters.  As discussed above, putting up a library will help students to expand their knowledge, offer a good place for students to spend their leisure time, and facilitate my school to build up a higher reputation.  Thus, spending money on a library is quite worthy.  

我觉得这些地方都没有解释好．逻辑结构上欠缺．

drift_er

我觉得有可能得5分。问题主要是例子不充分。这点可以扣一分，结构不错。