[求助]TWE001--刚刚写的11t作文，大家帮忙拍砖啊……

wjbai

刚刚写的11t作文，大家帮忙拍砖啊…… 刚刚写的，没掐时间，拼了不少。恶心死了，大家拍砖！ 人们为什么要上大学？ High education is one of the key words of our time and, as a result, society is changing at a speed which is quite unprecedented. However, the answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. Among countless factors that influence the choice, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. First plain truth, I am presenting here, is that accepting high education can keep people in our country wiser and more competitive. No issue abstracts more discussion and concern today than the one refers to knowledge and technology. There is no denying that colleges bring citizens (individuals, dweller) a fair proportion of such things. Relatively, on no account can we ignore the value of updating our knowledge, otherwise we cannot adapt ourselves to the modern society. The larger the number of people going to college is, the more knowledge and technology we can achieve. For instance, one friend of mine Jack does his utmost to enter the college even after working for two years. It proves then it pays to do so since Jack get back in the form of higher salary and more interesting job. In addition, behind my preference lies an equally important fact that education would bring more progress to my country. It is universally acknowledged that continuance progress is the thing that everyone want. As an individual, entering college means the ability to learn more things and attain more opportunity to some challenge work. Take LuXun as an example, He can deal with writing frequently while writhing is not his major in college. The reason is that he attained the ability to study. More and more students should follow the example. With the ability to study, more chances will come into us one by one if we keep studying after work. If all of us going to college,  the whole society will be more precise and efficient. Last but not least, entering college is beneficial to other areas, more peace and more safe since the young go to college and so on. Sagaciously, entering college is a choice to kill two birds with one stone. Admittedly, entering college also has disadvantage to some extent, for example, it takes much time .But if all the factors are contemplated, the advantages of M carry more weight than those minor drawback. From that been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion once more. In conclusion, all reliable evidences point to one saying that doing high education will benefit us not only in knowledge and technology , but also in the ability to pursuing them . Consequently, it will not fail to be a safer and wiser choice to entering college, and more often than not, we should do a as soon as possible，however time it may take at the moment.

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-11-12 18:28:01编辑过]

wjbai

参考了前面那个TWE超级笔记，呵呵