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31#
发表于 2006-11-11 19:03:00 | 只看该作者

B好在对称一点,但是

B: as competing companies one day may be partners the next.这是人话吗???完全看不懂说什么

不同意上面的mm,A选项怎么不是句子了?

as companies (that compete one day) may be partners the next.

 

 

nn 指点

as companies (that compete one day) may be partners the next.

 

 

nn 指点

as companies (that compete one day) may be partners the next.

 

 

nn 指点

32#
发表于 2007-1-8 22:38:00 | 只看该作者
UP
33#
发表于 2007-4-18 13:39:00 | 只看该作者

自己开始选了A,现在看一看,发现B才对的。

A Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

B Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

a中的MORE可以修饰industries, 也可以修饰established

B里面的more修饰的对象很清晰

34#
发表于 2007-4-19 13:03:00 | 只看该作者

我地又错埋同一题啦,细bear。

35#
发表于 2007-5-8 17:33:00 | 只看该作者
ding
36#
发表于 2007-8-8 13:28:00 | 只看该作者

我觉得哪个more established industries不太能造成歧义,因为后面提到了IT industry,逻辑上也能知道比较的是IT industry和更加成熟的industry之间的竞争特点区别。

B中Although地用法我也不同意,比较的是两个行业line of competition的区别,用although这种强烈转折,不合适。用whereas是正确的,只是对比两个行业的区别,并没有强烈转折的意思。

37#
发表于 2007-9-17 10:37:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢
38#
发表于 2007-10-10 16:52:00 | 只看该作者
39#
发表于 2008-11-11 00:01:00 | 只看该作者

    

the latter part of B sounds like a perfect parellelism to
me:

        

        competing companies one day

may be

        partners the next ("day" understood).

        

in comparision, A obviously doesnt do well, unless it is changed into something
like:

        as companies that  compete
one day may cooperate the next.

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Make sense, vote for B now

40#
发表于 2009-1-19 19:57:00 | 只看该作者

B中in industries that are more established, 与in the Internet industry不对称,

     one day位置变,意思变

A对称较差,但最不致死

故A必然对

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