GWD 17-14

puccamummy

Q14:

Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete

Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies

   Answer: B

为什么A错呢 ？

tigerzheng

我个人认为AS在此表示原因，而A从AS后不是一个句子，所以不对。

puccamummy

是啊

现在头脑清醒多了

就是这个原因！

要用such as 或者as＋句子

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-11-11 21:07:56编辑过]

yangxiaogang

我不同意2楼意见， B中as后边仍然是引导完整状语从句。我觉得A和B相比 有2个错误，‘they'指代不清；competing company 由于定语从句。请指教！

wanze

b　　　读不通啊

drift_er

B的平行结构最工整，they指代lines。

tom_2008

B中的they是否指代不清，可以指代industries？

narcissus1225

有幾點疑問 如果有誤 務必請各位指正

1. A,和B的指代對像不是都是一樣嗎? 都是指代lines??

還是因為B的...the lines of competition...  以N1 of N2的時後 N1要用the明確指出來嗎?? 不太清楚可不可以這樣判斷 請各位指正

2. 另外前面有nn提到  "B的competing company 由于定语从句" 但是這樣說來A的" the more established industries" 不也是很好嗎?

3. A的" , as companies that compete one day may be partners the next" 不也是一個完整的句子嗎? 是因為 compete後面不完全的關係嗎? (沒有說清楚compete甚麼東西) 所以不選的嗎?

Joey

以下是引用puccamummy在2005-11-11 16:39:00的发言：

Q14:

Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

1. Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete


2. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

我觉得A，B的前半部分都没错，因为they附近都有in the internet industry做状语，they可以确定是指代lines，并且B的结构更平行，使得they的指代更清晰。

而后半句A就没有B好，

1。companies that compet 没有competing companies 简洁

2。化简a 为companies may be partners..

      化简B为 competing companies may be partners... B的逻辑性更清晰的表现了对比的关系

个人观点

1. The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete


2. Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete


3. Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies

   Answer: B

为什么A错呢 ？

yangxiaogang

"2. 另外前面有nn提到  "B的competing company 由于定语从句" 但是這樣說來A的" the more established industries" 不也是很好嗎"

回楼上， 我认为more established indusries 有歧义，是更多的已经建立的产业呢（MORE做形容词）？还是建立程度比较深的产业呢（MORE做副词）？另外好像ETS不喜欢这种冠词+形容词（副词）+形容词+名词这样的结构。请指教！