(AA7)AA第七篇，大家看看，我怎么觉得这么怪呀，1看不懂，2分析不清逻辑关系，3不知道如何批判！请指点！

superman44444

AA第七篇，大家看看，我怎么觉得这么怪呀，1看不懂，2分析不清逻辑关系，3不知道如何批判！请指点！
7. The following appeared in the health section of a magazine on trends and lifestyles.

“People who use the artificial sweetener aspartame are better off consuming sugar, since aspartame can actually contribute to weight gain rather than weight loss. For example, high levels of aspartame have been shown to trigger a craving for food by depleting the brain of a chemical that registers satiety, or the sense of being full. Furthermore, studies suggest that sugars, if consumed after at least 45 minutes of continuous exercise, actually enhance the body’s ability to burn fat. Consequently, those who drink aspartame-sweetened juices after exercise will also lose this calorie-burning benefit. Thus it appears that people consuming aspartame rather than sugar are unlikely to achieve their dietary goals.”

smallball

译文：

关于流行和时尚的杂志的健康板块：

吃人工糖aspartame的人比吃糖的better off（？？）。因为aspartame确实可导致增重而不是减重。比如，高浓度的aspartame可通过消耗让大脑产生饱的感觉的化学物质来触发对食物的渴求。进一步地，研究显示，如果在连续运动至少45分钟后消耗糖，可提高身体燃烧脂肪的能力。因此，在运动后喝aspartame做甜味剂的果汁的人将失去消耗calorie的效果。因此食用spartame的人比吃糖的人更不容易达到他们的饮食（节食？dietary）规定。

1.范围内推攻击

2.忽略他因攻击

3.充分性攻击

文中只是在提a如何，并没有提到糖，只是再说人工糖怎样怎样，而且只是说高浓度的如何如何...

open to discussion

superman44444

smallball真好啊，谢谢，你的作文应该很好吧？

smallball

不客气，不是很好：）