【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day30

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Day29
1.(41)The budget for education reflects the administration's demand that the money is controlled by local school districts, but it can only be spent on teachers, not on books, computers, or other materials or activities.
(A) the money is controlled by local school districts, but it can only be spent
(B) the money be controlled by local school districts, but it allows them to spend the money only
(C) the money is to be controlled by local school districts, but allowing it only to be spent
(D) local school districts are in control of the money, but it allows them to spend the money only
(E) local school districts are to be in control of the money, but it can only spend it--WRONG

2.(42)As a result of a supernova explosion, every human being on Earth was bombarded on February 23, 1987, by about 100 billion neutrinos; fortunately, neutrinos are harmless elementary particles that are produced in nuclear reactions and that interact very weakly with matter.
(A) neutrinos are harmless elementary particles that are produced in nuclear reactions and that
(B) neutrinos, which are harmless, are elementary particles produced in nuclear reactions and which
(C) neutrinos are harmless elementary particles produced in nuclear reactions and which
(D) these harmless elementary particles are produced in nuclear reactions, and neutrinos
(E) these elementary particles, harmless products of nuclear reactions, are neutrinos that
--WRONG

3.(43)A one-million-year-old skull bearing traits associated both with Homo erectus and, in addition, Homo sapiens has been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, and indicates that modern humans developed much earlier than previously thought.
(A) both with Homo erectus and, in addition, Homo sapiens has been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, and indicates
(B) both with Homo erectus and Homo sapiens have been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, which indicates
(C) with both Homo erectus and Homo sapiens has been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, indicating
(D) with both Homo erectus and Homo sapiens and found in the Afar region of Eritrea, indicating
(E) with both Homo erectus and Homo sapiens have been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, which indicates
both and平行 排除AB；E：have错；D：and found in the Afar region of Eritrea 错，这个和前面不是平行关系

4.(44)Scientists at the Los Alamos National Laboratory have succeeded for the first time in mining heat from the Earth's interior and producing energy on a commercial scale, enough for efficient generation of electricity and heating factories and homes.
(A) and producing energy on a commercial scale, enough for efficient generation of electricity and heating
(B) and producing enough energy on a commercial scale for electricity to be generated efficiently and to heat
(C) for energy production on a commercial scale, enough for generating electricity efficiently and to heat
(D) to produce energy on a commercial scale, enough for generating electricity efficiently and for heating
(E) to produce enough energy on a commercial scale for efficient generation of electricity and heat
AB：mining heat和producing energy不是平行关系，排除
CD：enough位置错，E的语意才合理 哎多读两次就判断出来了

5.(45)The application of a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel allows scientists to examine molars of prehuman ancestors and determining that their diets were more varied than had been supposed.
(A) The application of a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel allows scientists to examine molars of prehuman ancestors and determining
(B) Through the application of a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel, the molars of prehuman ancestors were examined by scientists who determined
(C) When they applied a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel, scientists examined molars of prehuman ancestors, determining
(D) Applying a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel, the molars of prehuman ancestors have been examined by scientists, who determined
(E) Applying a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel, scientists have examined molars of prehuman ancestors and determined
A：allows scientiststo examine molars....and determining 不平行
B：废话太多
D：, the molars错 主语不是它

6.(46)The continental United States receives an average of 30 inches of precipitation a year; transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow of streams and rivers.
(A) transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow
(B) even though transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the remainder of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(C) although transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the balance of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(D) with transpiration from soil and from plants to return approximately 21 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contributes to the flow
(E) as transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contribute to the flow
不知道

7.(47)1998 saw several new ventures promoting online distance learning both at the college and graduate level, but also faculty members in large numbers began questioning whether the computer screen was an adequate replacement for the classroom.
(A) 1998 saw several new ventures promoting online distance learning both at the college and graduate level, but also faculty members in large numbers began
(B) In 1998 several new ventures were promoting online distance learning for both college-and for graduate-level courses, but it was also a year for a large number of faculty members who began
(C) With several new ventures promoting online distance learning both for college and graduate courses in 1998, it was also a year when a large number of faculty members had begun
(D) Although 1998 saw several new ventures promoting online distance learning for both college- and graduate-level courses, it was also a year when a large number of faculty members began
(E) Several new ventures were promoting online distance learning in 1998, at both the college level as well as the graduat3e, but it was also a year for faculty members to begin in large numbers
both and 不平行秒排

8.(48)Whereas scientists, because of random fluctuations in the weather, cannot determine the transition from one season to the next by monitoring temperatures on a daily basis, so they cannot determine the onset of global warming by monitoring average annual temperatures.
(A) Whereas scientists
(B) Just as scientists
(C) Like scientists who
(D) Inasmuch as a scientist
(E) In the same way a scientist
语意 cannot determine..., so they
其实不太知道为什么 反正把句子剪短看，多念几次靠感觉。。。

9.(49)The automobile company announced that the average price of next year's models would decrease four-tenths of one percent, amounting to about $72, as compared with comparably equipped cars and trucks this year.
(A) The automobile company announced that the average price of next year's models would decrease four-tenths of one percent, amounting to about $72, as compared with comparably equipped cars and trucks this year.
(B) The automobile company announced that the average price of next year's cars and trucks would decrease four-tenths of one percent, or about $72, from that of comparably equipped models this year.
(C) The automobile company announced that there would be a decrease of four-tenths of one percent in next year's models' average price, or about $72, below this year's comparably equipped cars and trucks.
(D) Compared to comparably equipped models this year, the automobile company announced that the average price of next year's cars and trucks would decrease about $72, less by four-tenths of one percent.
(E) Contrasted with comparably equipped cars and trucks of this year, the automobile company announced that the average price of next year's models would decrease about $72, or four-tenths of one percent.
分析比较对象

10.(50)Many teenagers undergo stress, but results of a recent study indicate that the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than are those that boys experience.
(A) are those that boys experience
(B) what boys experience
(C) boys' experience would
(D) boys' stress patterns do
(E) stress patterns of boys
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1.
答案：B
解析：
A.be动词形式错误。it指代不明，错误。（？）only修饰了spend，错误。
B.表示建议、命令之类的词，引导宾语从句或同位语从句，要用虚拟语气，动词需用动词原形，正确，并且该句中省略了should。
C.be动词形式错误。only修饰了spend，错误。
D.be动词形式错误。
E.be动词形式错误。it指代不明，错误。（？）only修饰了spend，错误。

2.
答案：A
解析：
B.and前后的句子结构不平行，错误。将harmless作为了插入语，逻辑语义改变，错误。
C.and前后的句子结构不平行，将主句和从句平行，错误。
D.these后面接的particles前文未提到过，所以illogical，错误。
E.these后面接的particles前文未提到过，所以illogical，错误。

3.
答案：C
解析：
A.both...and...结构前后不平行，错误。in addition与and语意重复，错误。
B.both...and...结构前后不平行，错误。主语是skull，用have主谓不一致，错误。
D.and前后都少谓语，句子结构不完整，错误。
E.主语是skull，用have主谓不一致，错误。

4.
答案：D
解析：
A.and前后不平行，错误。
B.逻辑语义改变，enough修饰了energy而不是用途，错误。
C.and前后不平行，错误。
E.逻辑语义改变，enough修饰了energy而不是用途，错误。

5.
答案：E
解析：
A.and前后的动词形式不平行，错误。
B.逻辑主语错误。
C.原句中并没有表明时间关系，所以使用时间状语从句导致逻辑语义发生改变，错误。
D.applying的逻辑主语变成了the morals，错误。

6.
答案：A
解析：
B.主谓不一致，错误。flow有名词形式，却用了动名词flowing，不简洁。
C.有两处主谓不一致，错误。flow有名词形式，却用了动名词flowing，不简洁。
D.the rest of the 9 inches，表达错误，应改为the rest of the 30 inches或remainder、balance等词才能正确表达原句的意思。with的使用使原句的句子重心改变，错误。
E.有两处主谓不一致，错误。the rest of the 9 inches，表达错误，应改为the rest of the 30 inches或remainder、balance等词才能正确表达原句的意思。

7.
答案：D
解析：
A.both...and...，结构前后不平行。but前后的两个分句意思上不够平行。
B.both...and...，结构前后不平行。but前后的句子重心不一致，错误。
C.both...and...，结构前后不平行。but前后的句子重心不一致，错误。
E.both和as well as的搭配错误，应该使用both...and...的固定搭配。but前后的句子重心不一致，错误。

8.
答案：B
解析：
A.whereas用于表转折，这里用其表类比，错误。
B.Just as X ..., so Y ...。正如X...一样，Y也...的结构，正确。
C.so前面是定语从句，不是完整句子，不能与so后面的内容平行，错误。
D.后面的代词they无法用于指代单数名词a scientist，错误。In as much as用于表原因，这里用其表类比，错误。
E.后面的代词they无法用于指代单数名词a scientist，错误。

9.
答案：B
解析：
A.应该先提到cars and trucks，再说可比的models（将models限定在cars and trucks这两类之内），顺序错误导致语义不明。
C.there be句型不简洁，且通常用于自然事物。below前后的对象不一致，前面是price后面是cars and trucks，错误。
D.compare比较的两个比较对象不对等，company和models不能相比。
E.contrast比较的两个比较对象不对等，company和cars、trucks不能相比。

10.
答案：A
解析：
A.than后面使用了倒装结构。
B.缺少助动词，错误。
C.than前后的对比对象不对等，前面强调的是the patterns of stress，后面也应该与之相同，但后面却强调的是experience，错误。使用了would，错误。
D.助动词使用了do，错误，因为前后比较的是可能性的大小，应该延用are。
E.“男孩子的压力类型”使得语义改变，错误，应该是“男孩子经历的压力类型”。缺少助动词，错误。

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1.(41)The budget for education reflects the administration's demand that the money is controlled by local school districts, but it can only be spent on teachers, not on books, computers, or other materials or activities.
B错选A
(A) the money is controlled by local school districts, but it can only be spent 应该用虚拟语气
(B) the money be虚拟语气，省略should controlled by local school districts, but it allows them to spend the money only
(C) the money is to be controlled by local school districts, but allowing it only to be spent but分句缺少svo
(D) local school districts are in control of the money, but it allows them to spend the money only 应该用虚拟语气
(E) local school districts are to be in control of the money, but it can only spend it 应该用虚拟语气；两个it指代不明

2.(42)As a result of a supernova explosion, every human being on Earth was bombarded on February 23, 1987, by about 100 billion neutrinos; fortunately, neutrinos are harmless elementary particles that are produced in nuclear reactions and that interact very weakly with matter.
A
(A) neutrinos are harmless elementary particles that are produced in nuclear reactions and that
(B) neutrinos, which are harmless, are elementary particles produced in nuclear reactions and which 不平行
(C) neutrinos are harmless elementary particles produced in nuclear reactions and which不平行
(D) these harmless elementary particles are produced in nuclear reactions, and neutrinos
(E) these elementary particles, harmless products of nuclear reactions, are neutrinos that
that 限定性定语从句从语法上应该修饰紧临的名词 neutrinos,而逻辑上应该修饰 particles,意为“这些基本粒子是与物质反应非常弱的中微子”，实际上是所有的中微子都与物质反应很弱，否则 neutrinos 就不是 harmless，因此不合逻辑。

3.(43)A one-million-year-old skull bearing traits associated both with Homo erectus and, in addition, Homo sapiens has been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, and indicates that modern humans developed much earlier than previously thought.
C
(A) both with Homo erectus and, in addition, Homo sapiens has been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, and indicates 不对称
(B) both with Homo erectus and Homo sapiens have been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, which indicates 不对称；主谓不一致；which指代错误
(C) with both Homo erectus and Homo sapiens has been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, indicating
(D) with both Homo erectus and Homo sapiens and found in the Afar region of Eritrea, indicating 无svo
(E) with both Homo erectus and Homo sapiens have been found in the Afar region of Eritrea, which indicates 主谓不一致；which指代错误

4.(44)Scientists at the Los Alamos National Laboratory have succeeded for the first time in mining heat from the Earth's interior and producing energy on a commercial scale, enough for efficient generation of electricity and heating factories and homes.
D错选B
(A) and producing energy on a commercial scale, enough for efficient generation of electricity and heating 不平行
(B) and producing enough energy on a commercial scale for electricity to be generated efficiently and to heat 不平行；
… scale for electricity…and to heat, for 结构和 to do 结构破坏了平行,要么都用 for 结构,要么都用 to do 结构
(C) for energy production on a commercial scale, enough for generating electricity efficiently and to heat 不平行；for 结构不如 to do 结构表达目的有效
(D) to produce energy on a commercial scale, enough for generating electricity efficiently and for heating
(E) to produce enough energy on a commercial scale for efficient generation of electricity and heat heat和produce平行，句意错误
【错因】如果划线部分存在和前面关联的连词and；but，要关注和前面动词的平行结构是否正确

5.(45)The application of a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel allows scientists to examine molars of prehuman ancestors and determining that their diets were more varied than had been supposed.
E
(A) The application of a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel allows scientists to examine molars of prehuman ancestors and determining 不平行
(B) Through the application of a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel, the molars of prehuman ancestors were examined by scientists who determined 导致their指代不明；句意变化
(C) When they applied a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel, scientists examined molars of prehuman ancestors, determining when，当..时语意不存在
(D) Applying a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel, the molars of prehuman ancestors have been examined by scientists, who determined 逻辑主语错误；their指代错误
(E) Applying a new method for analyzing the chemistry of tooth enamel, scientists have examined molars of prehuman ancestors and determined

6.(46)The continental United States receives an average of 30 inches of precipitation a year; transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow of streams and rivers.
A
(A) transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow
(B) even though transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the remainder of 9 inches contribute to the flowing 能有名词形式，就不要用the+动名词做名词
(C) although transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the balance of 9 inches contribute to the flowing 能有名词形式，就不要用the+动名词做名词
(D) with transpiration from soil and from plants to return approximately 21 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contributes to the flow
介词 with 后面不能跟不定式 to do,并且将两个并列成分改变为主从成分,从而改变了原句的意思.
(E) as transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contribute to the flow

7.(47)1998 saw several new ventures promoting online distance learning both at the college and graduate level, but also faculty members in large numbers began questioning whether the computer screen was an adequate replacement for the classroom.
D
(A) 1998 saw several new ventures promoting online distance learning both at the college and graduate level, but also faculty members in large numbers began 不平行；but also连接的句子句意无法平行
(B) In 1998 several new ventures were promoting online distance learning for both college-and for graduate-level courses, but it was also a year for a large number of faculty members who began 不平行；but 分句中,it 只能指代 1998,因此 but 分句中的重心是 1998 这个年份, 而but前的分句:In 1998 several new ventures were…句子重心在ventures,因此从意思上前后分句不平行；用 for + n 结构来修饰 year,表达笨拙,不如 when 从句修饰 year 清晰.
(C) With several new ventures promoting online distance learning both for college and graduate courses in 1998, it was also a year when a large number of faculty members had begun 不平行；with改变了句子逻辑关系，并列结构变成了主从结构错误
(D) Although 1998 saw several new ventures promoting online distance learning for both college- and graduate-level courses, it was also a year when a large number of faculty members began
(E) Several new ventures were promoting online distance learning in 1998, at both the college level as well as the graduate, but it was also a year for faculty members to begin in large numbers

8.(48)Whereas scientists, because of random fluctuations in the weather, cannot determine the transition from one season to the next by monitoring temperatures on a daily basis, so they cannot determine the onset of global warming by monitoring average annual temperatures.
B错选E
(A) Whereas scientists  
whereas 表示转折意思,但从句子意思上看应该使相似关系； whereas… so 不符合习惯用法,应该去掉 so
(B) Just as scientists
(C) Like scientists who like...so不符合习惯用法
(D) Inasmuch as a scientist they无指代
(E) In the same way a scientist they无指代
【错因】不知道这个搭配：just as A do, so B do 比较结构的习惯搭配,译为:就如同 A…，B…；如果不同选项里名词单复数有变化，观察一下为划线部分是不是有表示单复数的词

9.(49)The automobile company announced that the average price of next year's models would decrease four-tenths of one percent, amounting to about $72, as compared with comparably equipped cars and trucks this year.
B错选A
(A) The automobile company announced that the average price of next year's models would decrease four-tenths of one percent, amounting to about $72, as compared with comparably equipped cars and trucks this year. 比较不对等；
amounting to about $72 作为伴随状语修饰前面主句,表现了 decrease four-tenths of one percent 的伴随结果,使人觉得平均价格减掉 0.4%以后价格总和变为了$72,而逻辑意思是减掉0.4%相当于 72$
(B) The automobile company announced that the average price of next year's cars and trucks would decrease four-tenths of one percent, or about $72, from that of comparably equipped models this year.
(C) The automobile company announced that there would be不简洁 a decrease of four-tenths of one percent in next year's models' average price, or about $72, below this year's comparably equipped cars and trucks.  比较不对等
(D) Compared to comparably equipped models this year, the automobile company announced that the average price of next year's cars and trucks would decrease about $72, less by four-tenths of one percent. 逻辑主语错误
(E) Contrasted with comparably equipped cars and trucks of this year, the automobile company announced that the average price of next year's models would decrease about $72, or four-tenths of one percent. 逻辑主语错误
【错因】句意没看懂；compare with也是比较结构，也需要关注比较是否对等

10.(50)Many teenagers undergo stress, but results of a recent study indicate that the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than are those that boys experience.
A错选B
(A) are those that boys experience are多余 补出助动词 are 使句子意思表达清晰无歧意
如果没有'are'，你有以下的歧义:
(meaning 1) more likely to result in depression than are stress patterns of boys (the intended meaning)女孩的压力模式比典型的男孩压力模式更容易导致抑郁(预期的意思)
(meaning 2) more likely to result in depression than in stress patterns of boys 女孩的压力模式比起陷入男孩的压力模式，更容易陷入抑郁
(B) what boys experience 比较不对等experience的是stress不是pattern
(C) boys' experience would would不对等，不能替代are；比较不对等
(D) boys' stress patterns do do不对等
(E) stress patterns of boys 不对等；缺乏助动词 are 意思表达模糊，有可能是和depression比较
【错因】在考虑是否需要省略时，应该看看语意有没有歧义

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1.B. 在require,demande 等表示建议/命令的动词后that从句需要用虚拟语气——动词原型，不加should
2.A. 句子逻辑——插入语
3.C. C中has的主语是skull; D中found 没有平行对象
4.D. 句子逻辑
5.E. 句子逻辑
6.A. B. 主谓不一致，contribute应该根据the remainder为单数
7.D. 平行结构
8.B. Just as+句子——动作
9.B. 句子逻辑（插入语）
10.A. 平行结构

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