【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day21

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1.(192)The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.
A.that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but
B.that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also
C.having been cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously but
D.cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also   
E.cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but

2.(193)As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A.As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B.As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes 无主句
C.The honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D.The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing         
E.The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causesstinger results... X
with the result that ——因此，从而；可以修饰所附的整个主句

3.(194)Since 1975 so many people have been moving to Utah such that Mormons who were once 75 percent of the population are now only accounting for half of it.
A.so many people have been moving to Utah such that Mormons who were once 75 percent of the population are now only accounting for half of it
B.many people have been moving to Utah, so Mormons once 75 percent of the population are now accounting for only half
C.that many people have been moving to Utah, such that the Mormons that were once 75 percent of the population are now accounting for only half of it
D.many people have been moving to Utah such that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the population, now only account for half        have been & account! RUN-ON
E.so many people have been moving to Utah that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the population, now account for only half
SO...THAT不加情态动词表结果

4.(195)In archaeology, there must be a balance between explanation of the value and workings of archaeology, revealing the mysteries of past and present cultures, and to promote respect for archaeological sites.
A.between explanation of the value and workings of archaeology, revealing the mysteries of past and present cultures, and to promote
B.among explaining the value and workings of archaeology, revealing the mysteries of past and present cultures, and promoting
C.between explaining the value and workings of archaeology, the revealing of the mysteries of past and present cultures, and when promoting
D.among explaining the value and workings of archaeology, the revelation of the mysteries of past and present cultures, and to promote        
E.between explaining archaeology's value and workings, in the revealing of the mysteries of past and present cultures, and in promoting

5.(196)Leaching, the recovery of copper from the drainage water of mines, as a method of the extraction of minerals, it was well established as early as the eighteenth century, but until about 25 years ago miners did not realize that bacteria take an active part in the process.  
A.as a method of the extraction of minerals, it was well established
B.as a method of the extraction of minerals well established
C.was a well-established method of mineral extraction
D.was a well-established method of extracting mineral that was     
E.had been a method of mineral extraction, well established
非限定性修饰method逻辑含义错误，应该用限定性修饰来说明

6.(197)Soaring television costs accounted for more than half the spending in the presidential campaign of 1992, a greater proportion than it was in any previous election.
A.a greater proportion than it was
B.a greater proportion than
C.a greater proportion than they have been
D.which is greater than was so      
E.which is greater than it has been

7.(198)Between 1990 and 2000 the global economy grew more than it did during the 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture to 1950.
A.Between 1990 and 2000 the global economy grew more than it did during the 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture
B.Between 1990 and 2000 the growth of the global economy was more than that during 10,000 years, from when agriculture began
C.The growth of the global economy between 1990 and 2000 exceeds that which had been for 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture
D.The growth of the global economy between 1990 and 2000 exceeds what it has been for 10,000 years, from when agriculture began         
E.The growth of the global economy between 1990 and 2000 exceeded what it did for the 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture

8.(199)Recently physicians have determined that stomach ulcers are not caused by stress, alcohol, or rich foods, but a bacterium that dwells in the mucous lining of the stomach.
A.not caused by stress, alcohol, or rich foods, but
B.not caused by stress, alcohol, or rich foods, but are by
C.caused not by stress, alcohol, or rich foods, but by
D.caused not by stress, alcohol, and rich foods, but   
E.caused not by stress, alcohol, and rich foods, but are by

9.(200)Many financial experts believe that policy makers at the Federal Reserve, now viewing the economy as balanced between moderate growth and low inflation, are almost certain to leave interest rates unchanged for the foreseeable future.
A.Reserve, now viewing the economy as balanced between moderate growth and low inflation, are
B.Reserve, now viewing the economy to be balanced between that of moderate growth and low inflation and are
C.Reserve who, now viewing the economy as balanced between moderate growth and low inflation, are
D.Reserve, who now view the economy to be balanced between that of moderate growth and low inflation, will be   
E.Reserve, which now views the economy to be balanced between moderate growth and low inflation, is

10.(201)Spanish poet Juan Ramón Jiménez, who won the Nobel Prize for Literature in 1956, so embarrassed in his later years by what he considered the excessive sentiment in the poems in his first two collections, he destroyed every copy he could find.
A.so embarrassed in his later years by what he considered the excessive sentiment in the poems in his first two collections, he destroyed
B.and was so embarrassed in his later years by what he considered as the excessive sentiment in the poems in his first two collections that he destroyed
C.in his later years he was so embarrassed by what he considered as the excessive sentiment in the poems in his first two collections, destroying
D.was so embarrassed in his later years by what he considered the excessive sentiment in the poems in his first two collections that he destroyed      
E.because he was so embarrassed in his later years by what he considered as the excessive sentiment in the poems in his first two collections, destroying

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A--E   with the result that，意思是“结果是，因此，从而”，可以修饰它所附的整个主句。
         A的this也不能代表前面的整句话的意思，不好，后面也很冗杂。
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16’35’’ 6/10
1.        E 2’09’’
2.        A 4’15’’
(A) this不能指代前面这个句子的意思；result in +n.后面结构复杂，且无法表达出result 的整体内容，awkward，不如直接result + that从句；分词引导的状语staying where it is inserted在句子中间，导致dangling modification，既可以向前修饰as引导的从 句也可以向后修饰this引导的主句；
3.        E 2’08’’
4.        B 36’
5.        C 1’41’’
6.        C 1’12’’ B
(B) Correct；原句补完整：Soaring television costs accounted for more than half the spending in the presidential campaign of 1992, a greater proportion than（the proportion）（television costs had accounted for of the spending）in any previous election；这个句子中只是单个名词(proportion)的比较，所以不需要考虑than后面 补出主谓，只补出介词短语就够了，不用担心后面的介词短语in any previou election 没有平行对象
(C) 现在完成时使用错误，in any previous election说明应用过去完成时；they指代 soaring television costs，使逻辑意义错误，比较结构需要比较对象对等，前者为a great proportion 是一个量词不能和具体的费用对比，而且其他的election不一定是 soaring的；同时have been与前面的accounted for不平行，只要也要用have done
7.        C 1’03’’ A
C. that which had been用法awkward，时态错误（一般过去时即可），且that指代错误， 无法指代the growth of the global economy整个短语，只能指代growth；for 1000 years错误，应该在1000 years前加上定冠词以特指那1000年；exceeds时态错误，应 该用一般过去时（比如Shakespears was an English poet.也用一般过去时）
8.        C 42’’
9.        D/A 2’12’’ A
D. view sth as sth；between that of中的that无所指；will be时态错误，be certain是发 生在现在的动作。
10.        D 32’’

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