【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day7

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Day7
1.选C （考点：intended meaning用定从修饰还是用现在分词；定从的限定修饰和非限定修饰；定从的修饰词定位以及和主谓一致；E的说法很weird，独立主格和being用法都不对）
2.选A  (考点：and引导的句子平行+某个clause缺乏主谓；夹心修饰；intended meaning， 最后为划线的部分到底做现在分词引导的伴随或结果还是应该是一个主句）
3. 选C (考点：run-on；比较的idiom用法，不能less 和compared to 搭配； 时态；when compared to不符合intended meaning）

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1.（187）United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.
A.that included (和posts 离得太远，前面有逗号)
B.which includes （posts 是复数，用includes 不对）
C.including
D.some of which were （只列举了一个）
E.among them being （being 不对）

2.（188）Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are now drawing solid conclusions about how the human brain grows and how babies acquire language.
A.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are
B.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are （and requires papalism）
C.Neuroscientists amassing a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are （and requires papalism）
D.Neuroscientists have amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,     (the meaning- this indicates the emphasis is have amassed a wealth of knowledge, but all that work was done for a purpose, thus, the focus should be drawing conclusions)
E.Neuroscientists have amassed, over the past twenty years, a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, (fragment, over the past twenty  years should not be non-essential modifier, 20 years of hard work is essential!! ?)

3.（189）She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.
A.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to (she compared to Germany)
B.Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to (comparing with Germany; less successful than 明显是要比较她这个人，因为less successful 只能形容她这个人，而compare 后面跟得是德国)
C.Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in (perfect parallelism)
D.Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to   （和德国比较呢）
E.She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in（现在在纽约，之前在德国，过去完成时没有道理，than 后面in Germany 和前面也不平行，应该用in New York）

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1.（187）United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.
C
A.that included (that前面不能加逗号)
B.which includes（which就近修饰 有修饰歧义）
C.including  是对前面动词was appointed的一个补充？
D.some of which were
E.among them being

2.（188）Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are now drawing solid conclusions about how the human brain grows and how babies acquire language.
D
A.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are完成时不能做名词的修饰语
B.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are（and前面没有谓语
C.Neuroscientists amassing a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are （and前面没有谓语
D.Neuroscientists have amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,  
E.Neuroscientists have amassed, over the past twenty years, a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, (over the past twenty years有修饰歧义)

3.（189）She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.
C
A.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to（run-on）
B.Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to（less..as错）
C.Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in
D.Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to （不知道哪错 只觉得C更好）
E.She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in（run-on）

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1.C
考點:簡潔&including
2.A
考點:不要run on, 要有主詞
3.C
考點:不要run on, 要有主詞

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