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1.（187）United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.
A.that included
B.which includes
C.including
D.some of which were
E.among them being
1.B时态错误排 2.being多余，排E 3.AD 不优，选C
2.（188）Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are now drawing solid conclusions about how the human brain grows and how babies acquire language.
A.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are
B.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are
C.Neuroscientists amassing a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are
D.Neuroscientists have amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,     
E.Neuroscientists have amassed, over the past twenty years, a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,
A：缺谓语排BC；amass与drawl无关，排DE
3.（189）She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.
A.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to
B.Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to
C.Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in
D.Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to   
E.She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in
C：ABD比较结构错误，排；E runon了而且时态不对。

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1.C
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2.A
时态
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3.C
比较前后一致，注意时态

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1.（187）United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.  C
A. that included ---that不引导非限
B. which includes---which定从修饰posts 谓语includes错，应为include
C. including—including比which included更为简洁、明确，including介词短语修饰前面短语的核心词posts
D. some of which were -- which与所指的posts相隔太远
E. among them being---Being累赘；among them being修饰对象不明确(awkward)，并且无法引导独立主格

2.（188）Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are now drawing solid conclusions about how the human brain grows and how babies acquire language. A
根据句意，现在正在做的事应该为更重要的，因此要作谓语。
A. Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are
B. Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are –-and前句缺谓语，and多余
C. Neuroscientists amassing a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are-- and前句缺谓语and前后句不平行
D. Neuroscientists have amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, --原谓语降级为修饰，错
补充：drawing并不是have amassed的直接结果，所以不能以现在分词短语伴随修饰
（现在分词做伴随起到伴随动作和伴随结果两种功能，前者表示与主句动作同时发生，后者需要是主句动作的直接结果。当被修饰主句已经是完成时态，那么后面的现在分词本身就不可能再与主句动作发生在同一时刻，所以无法以“伴随动作”的身份出现，只可能行使“伴随结果”的功能）
E. Neuroscientists have amassed, over the past twenty years, a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, --原谓语降级为修饰，错

3.（189）She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States. C
A. She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to –--搬到纽约后发生，用过完表示在原德国之前，错；less successful用than，compare to/with+数据；缺连词
B. Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to–--搬到纽约后发生，用过完表示在原德国之前，错；less successful用than
C. Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in-正确
D. Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to—less successful用than
E. She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in–--搬到纽约后发生，用过完表示在原德国之前；缺连词错

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Day7
1.（187）United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.
A.that included（修饰太远）
B.which includes（修饰term错误）
C.including✅
D.some of which were （修饰太远）
E.among them being （修饰太远，being没必要）

2.（188）Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are now drawing solid conclusions about how the human brain grows and how babies acquire language.
A.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are ✅
B.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are（前半句没有谓语）
C.Neuroscientists amassing a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are（amassing修饰undiomatic，前半句没有谓语）
D.Neuroscientists have amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,     （句意重心应该在后半句）
E.Neuroscientists have amassed, over the past twenty years, a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, （句意重心应该在后半句）

3.（189）She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.
A.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to （前后比较对象不对等）
B.Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to （前后比较对象不对等）
C.Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in✅
D.Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to    （前后比较对象不对等）
E.She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in （前后比较对象不对等，过去完成式没有必要）