【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day5

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1.A
2.B。排除CE的in convincing，另外排除A的have convinced（单复不一致）。Using的用法更直接，选B
3.C。Expect sb to do something, 选C

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                1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.  
                A.doubling the increase of
                B.doubling that of the increase in
                C.double as much as the increase of
                D.twice as many as the increase in   
                E.twice as many as the increase of
                ——cde的主语是人的数量，错，b的that指代不清楚
                ——a
               
                2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
                A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
                B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
                C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
                D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
                E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
                ——have错，排除a，in convincing错，排除ce，by the use of排除d
                ——b
               
                3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
                A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
                B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
                C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
                D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
                E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
                ——expect sb to do，排除de，句子重心排除ab
——c

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Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.  
A.doubling the increase of
B.doubling that of the increase in
C.double as much as the increase of
D.twice as many as the increase in   
E.twice as many as the increase of


2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
A.using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced
B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced
E.which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing
答案：B
Campaign单数，主谓一致排除A
根据语意逻辑，不是在说服农业部门说服，而是活动说服农业部门，排除in convinced/convincing，即是排除C/E
By the use表达冗杂，排除D


3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends
D.that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends
E.that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends
答案：C
They were 和they have been比较词前面没有出现be动词，所以排除A/B
To set dividends表目的，语意不对，排除E
D？

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1. 选错
2. B
A    a campaign + have 错误
B    正确
C    重点不是在convinceing中组织了compaign，重点是compaign convince了the Department
D    by the use of冗余
E    which used 时态错误
3.
A    were时态错误
B    重点在more conservative而不是set dividends
C    正确
D    expect sb. to do sth. ✔，expect sb. that ✖
E    expect sb. to do sth. ✔，expect sb. that ✖

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Day5
1.(181)The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.  D错—应为A
坐头等舱的人在1990年迅速增加，增长是前一年增加的两倍。
A. doubling the increase of --double意思是"make twice as great"，使increase/growth 两倍，doing引导伴随状语或者目的状语
B. doubling that of the increase in –that无指代
C. double as much as the increase of --错应该改为doubling，
D. twice as many as the increase in-- Many用法错误the increase不是可数的量
"the increase in X" 意为X本身在增加，套用到原句里面不对
补充：
twice as many as/ X times Y/ double as much as是同位语修饰词(appositive modifier)，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不是一个figure，所以不能用 twice as many as这个结构
E. twice as many as the increase of— "the increase of TIME PERIOD"意为某时段的增加量；Many用法错误

2.(182)The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign—using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food. B
有机食品行业组织了一个成功的活动，活动用各种方式，活动使农业部确信要改变规章制度。

A. using Web sites, public meetings, and also mass mailings—that have convinced—have错，前修饰主语为campaign，应为单数；also多余
B. using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced
C.by using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing-- in convincing修饰动作organized，主语为organic food industry语意不对（By using逻辑含义上不等于using，其表达的是因为通过那三个方式草根运动才是成功的，这个含义不对）
D.by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings—that convinced-- by the use of不简洁；一般过去时态不对，表示convinced发生在has organized之前
E. which used Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—in convincing-- in convincing修饰动作organized，主语为organic food industry语意不对；一般过去时态不对，表示convinced发生在has organized之前，不合逻辑

3.(183)Despite recent increases in sales and cash flow that have propelled automobile companies' common stocks to new highs, several industry analysts expect automakers, in order to conserve cash, to set dividends more conservatively than they were. B错—应为C
比之前更保守的设置股息
A.to set dividends more conservatively than they were-- they were不对conservatively修饰动作set后面也应该为一个动作的比较，实义动词to set(表达预测，将来时)与系动词were不平行，应该是: to set Div. more conservatively than they have done.
B.to set dividends more conservatively than they have been to set与have been不平行，要在been后面加上setting或改为have set以修正平行
C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends—to be表示从现在开始的未来，have been 从过去 到现在，时间轴上没有空缺
D. that they will be more conservative than they were in setting dividends-- that后they多余Expect sb. that搭配错误，只能用expect that或expect sb. to do；were的时态问题
E. that they will be more conservative than they have been to set dividends--that后they多余； to set错误，应该改为in setting

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【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day5


第一题：
A.doubling the increase of  正确答案

A. Correct；这里的double是"make twice as great"的意思，也就是使increase/growth
两倍；present participle结构修饰前面整个分句，这正是我们想要的，因为这里没有
确切的名词来表示the increase of the number of people，所以必须使用修饰语来修
饰整个从句。
B. That无指代对象，有人说that是指代the number，如果是指代the number的话，是
累赘的，所以that并不指向任何成分；the increase in previous year是指previous year
的增长(这个逻辑doesn’t make sense)，而不是在previous year增长，应该用the
increase of the previous year。
C. double应该改为doubling，这样划线成分才能修饰前面整个分句，double as much as
是同位语修饰词(appositive modifier)，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不
是一个figure，所以不能用double as many as这个结构；即便as much as能成功修
饰number也不对，数量应该用great来修饰，见下面补充5。
D. Many用法错误，因为the increase不是一个countable quantity(这里the increase可
以看做是一个代词，而它所指代的对象就是前面出现过的内容：the number of the
people，而the number of the people是一个表达数量的数字而不是可数名词，所以
the increase也不能够用many来修饰)；twice as many as是同位语修饰词(appositive
modifier)，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不是一个figure，所以不能用
twice as many as这个结构，awkward。(见下面知识点补充1)；the increase in
previous year错误,"the increase in X" 意为X本身在增加，套用到原句里面不对！
E. Many用法错误，因为the increase不是一个countable quantity(from Manhattan)；
twice as many as结构使用错误同上。"the increase of TIME PERIOD"意为某时段的
增加量，表达正确！

第二题：B.using Web sites, public meetings, and mass mailings—that has convinced

A. and also在列举的时候多余，不过在also有时候是作为强调而且不用在列举中不一
定多余（and also还有一种情况下是redundant的：both X and also Y）；have应该
改为has
B. Correct；原句含义为：组织了一个成功的草根运动--其中用到了网站、公共集会、
广发邮件--该草根运动…… 注意选项B保持了现在完成时:“已经组织了一场运动…
说服了。”我们不能在这里使用一般过去时"convince "，因为那个时态和现在完成
时不匹配。
C. By using逻辑含义上不等于using，其表达的是因为通过那三个方式草根运动才是成
功的，这个含义不对；in convincing不做定语而是状语，修饰的是前面分句及前面
整个分句的动作organized，表达organize是convincing中的一个动作，改变原句合
理逻辑含义。
D. By using错误同C；and不可以换为as well as，as well as只是一个修饰语，其使mass
mailings与前两项的并列关系改变为从属结构，而且并没有A, B, as well as C的结构；
the use of 表达wordy ； 用了convinced 一般过去时表示convinced 发生在has
organized之前，逻辑含义不合理。
E. Which used时态错误，“which used”(一般过去时)不应该出现在“has organized”
(现在完成时)之前，这种结构错误地暗示了这场运动在组织之前就“使用了X、Y和
Z”，逻辑含义矛盾；in convincing不做定语而是目的状语，改变原句合理逻辑含义。

第三题：C.to be more conservative than they have been in setting dividends

A. 实义动词to set(表达预测，将来时)与系动词were不平行，应该是: to set Div. more
conservatively than they have done.
B. to set与have been不平行，要在been后面加上setting或改为have set以修正平行。
C. Correct；be + adj + in doing something很顺口, e.g. She is very active in posting
questions on CD.；时态也很好：to be表示从现在开始的未来，have been 从过去
到现在，时间轴上没有空缺
D. Expect sb. that搭配错误，只能用expect that或expect sb. to do；were的时态问题
E. 不能用Expect sb. that，同D； to set错误，应该改为in setting