【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day 1

petittomato

B
help do 最简洁，and表达对象并列清晰
C
between and; so ... as
D
分离状语之后，主语最好直接出现在句子开头

TiffanyTiti

Day1

1.（170）Margaret Mead, the best-known anthropologist of the twentieth century, helped shape public opinion on fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with the relative merits of competition and cooperation.

A.shape public opinion on fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with
—— like 不能表举例；along with 前后为从属关系，并非完全对等。
B.shape public opinion in such fundamentally important areas as attitudes toward children and families and
C.to shape public opinion about such fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, also about
—— like不能表举例；also about 前后平行关系不够对等，相对不优。
D.the shaping of public opinion for fundamentally important areas such as attitudes toward children and families, and those toward   
—— the shaping of 复杂动名词相对不优于动词；those想指代attitudes，但可能有歧义指代families。
E.the shaping of public opinion around fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, and those of
—— the shaping of 相对不优；Like 不能表举例；Those错因同上。


2.（171）One of the primary distinctions between our intelligence with that of other primates may lay not so much in any specific skill but in our ability to extend knowledge gained in one context to new and different ones.

A.between our intelligence with that of other primates may lay not so much in any specific skill but
—— 固定搭配错误。
B.between our intelligence with that of other primates may lie not so much in any specific skill but instead
—— 固定搭配错误。
C. between our intelligence and that of other primates may lie not so much in any specific skill as
D.our intelligence has from that of other primates may lie not in any specific skill as   
—— 定从that省略相对不优；that想指代one of the primary distinctions？句意不清晰。  
E.of our intelligence to that of other primates may lay not in any specific skill but
—— 两个of介词连用相对不优；to that搭配错误，应该是to which





3.（172）Introduced by Italian merchants resident in London during the sixteenth century, in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being ship owners, overseas merchants, or professional moneylenders.

A.in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being
—— 介词短语置于句首，主句应该能发出该动作；being结构相对不优。
B.in England life insurance had remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were
—— 主语错误同上；没必要用过去完成时；固定搭配错误；who定从相对wordy。
C.until the end of the seventeenth century life insurance in England had remained a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically
—— 主语错误同上；时态错误同上。
D.life insurance in England remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically   
E.life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century in England a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were
—— 固定搭配错误；who定从相对于独立主格更wordy。

Moniii

1：B
help用法：help (to) do sth
没有help the doing，排除D和E。
A、C选项like用法错误。

2.C
between and，所以AB错。
用from连接两个比较对象不合适，排除D。
lay应该改成lie，排除E。

3.D
因为前半句，所以画线部分的主语为life insurance。C的主语离句首太远，C排除。AB同理，排除。
E选项between with用法错误，排除E。

Yuhang在对大

1.B
Shape/ to shape都可以，动词形式优于名词形式，排除DE。such搭配as而不是like，排除C。and并列attitudes和merits，along with语义上不如and，排除A。选C。

2.C
Shape/ to shape都可以，动词形式优于名词形式，排除DE。such搭配as而不是like，排除C。and并列attitudes和merits，along with语义上不如and，排除A。选C。

3.D
Introduced by后面的主句最好直接出这个主语，优先考虑DE，between and排除E。回头看ABC，between and排除B。Being冗余排除A。CD中优选D

CHENOlivia

我的答案：BCD
1.
表示例如，不能用like。排除ACE。
B help do相较于D the shaping更为简洁。同时D的those 指代attitudes，意思表达有问题。

2.
Between and 的搭配，排除AB
C正确
D not in as in 有问题，同时定语从句修饰distinction也不好
E 两个of 会导致第二个that of 里的that 指代模糊

3.
Introduced by所以主句的主语是insurance，排除ABC
E between and的搭配

一只Irene

Day1

1.（170）Margaret Mead, the best-known anthropologist of thetwentieth century, helped shape public opinion on fundamentallyimportant areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with therelative merits of competition and cooperation.

A.shape public opinion on fundamentallyimportant areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with
B.shape public opinion in such fundamentallyimportant areas as attitudes toward children and families and
C.to shape public opinion about suchfundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, alsoabout
D.the shaping of public opinion forfundamentally important areas such as attitudes toward children and families,and those toward   
E.the shaping of public opinion aroundfundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, andthose of

解析 选B

idioms: 1.such as排除C 2.like在GMAT中不能用作举例，排除AE

parallelism: 根据meaning，是attitudes和merits平行

简洁：shape比the shaping of简洁

2.（171）One of the primary distinctions between ourintelligence with that of other primates may lay not so much in any specificskill but in our ability to extend knowledge gained in one context tonew and different ones.

A.between our intelligence with that of otherprimates may lay not so much in any specific skill but
B.between our intelligence with that of otherprimates may lie not so much in any specific skill but instead
C.between our intelligence and that of otherprimates may lie not so much in any specific skill as
D.our intelligence has from that of otherprimates may lie not in any specific skill as      
E.of our intelligence to that of other primatesmay lay not in any specific skill but

解析 错选E× 正确答案：C

parallelism: not…but…排除AB

idioms: distinctions between…and…排除ABDE

3.（172）Introduced by Italian merchants resident in London duringthe sixteenth century, in England life insurance remained until the endof the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individualunderwriters and their clients, typically being ship owners, overseasmerchants, or professional moneylenders.

A.in England life insurance remained until theend of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individualunderwriters and their clients, typically being
B.in England life insurance had remained untilthe end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individualunderwriters with their clients, who typically were
C.until the end of the seventeenth century lifeinsurance in England had remained a specialized contract between individualunderwriters and their clients, typically
D.life insurance in England remained until theend of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individualunderwriters and their clients, typically   
E.life insurance remained until the end of theseventeenth century in England a specialized contract between individualunderwriters with their clients, who typically were

解析 选D

modifiers: initial modifiers, 排除ABC

idioms: between…and…排除E

meaning:直到17世纪末，在英国人寿保险仍然是个体保险人和他们客户之间的特殊合同

superyingying

1. help shape opinion in such … as A and B
like不能用于举例,排除ACE
B和D相比，help do 比help sth好，两个平行之间，and前面不要逗号，如果逗号and是连接词连接句子，那后面的句子不完整。
B
2. between … and … lie not so much in A as in B
Between … and … 排除AB
Lay排除AE
D选项的that指代变了，比较不平行，我们的智力和other primates比
C
3. Introduced by … in London …, life insurance in England remained … a contract between individual underwriters and their clients,  A, B, or C.
主语life insurance应在划线部分句首，排除ABC
如果用who引导定语从句修饰clients，则who前面不应用逗号与clients隔开，隔开后变成修饰individual underwriters，明显句意不对，排除E
D

Ranyo

B. such+n.+as+attitudes toward… and the relative merits of…
such as中间可以加入名词。注意谁和谁并列。永远注意“those”这样的词指代谁。

C. between and固定用法； not so much…as…
primate 灵长类动物

D. 在CD之中纠结了一下，但感觉D更好，因为D直接点明了主语life insurance in England

Zoeq700

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jimjimflyfly

1.b
in A，like表举例不优，along with使两个态度不再形成并列关系，而是表示伴随，根据句意两者应当并列，没有主次之分
in C，ike表举例不优，后半部分不平行
in D&E，shaping使用动名词形式，表明不是MM亲自帮助塑造公众观点，后半部分不平行
2.C
A&B between and结构缺失
E may后应当原型lie
3.D
ABC中，未划线部分initial modifier，后面直接跟主语
E in England位置不优，应当是英国的LI remain…，between with结构不优