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jackdua_cn

求教: 真题一道

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.

A. to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs

B. to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing

C. is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs

D. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs

E. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-10-20 2:37:56编辑过]

yangxiaogang

A

yangxiaogang

SORRY,B IS BEST

joe11

A. the length of which is that of ..., and it 中的代词 that, it 指代不祥

B. which 指代 the world, 错误

C. which 指代 the world, 错误

D.

E. weighing 错误

yangxiaogang

我认为是B,claim to be 的搭配不可以更改， WHICH修饰的歧义问题是EFFECTIVE的错误，CLAIM的错误是corrective的错误。

lukrenee

求教: 真题一道

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.

A. to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs

B. to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing

C. is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs

D. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs

E. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing

原句中IT CLAIMS是修饰WHAT的定语，可以省略，A,B中的TO BE表示将要产生的情况，与UNVEIL矛盾；并且A中IT指代不清，B中WEIGHING与前面的AS LONG AS不再是并列关系，改变句意；至于WHICH到底指代WORLD还是CAMCORDER，其实还是要看句意，还是那句话：语义逻辑高于语法。

C中IT指代不清，而且AND是与WHICH之前的部分并列，改变句义；

E表达太过啰嗦，而且也改变了从句的并列关系，改变乐句义；

jackdua_cn

thanks and got it . D