[注意]甘草子的11T每日复习报告^o^

yihui

版主真够意思啊

yihui

版主真够意思啊

甘草子

5555计算机考试也来凑热闹真是让人抓狂阿~~

不过不幸中的万幸是不考excel...

今天要看单词和作文，嘿嘿~

甘草子

为什么听力的短对话老是错呢？？真是伤心啊~~~~~

enjoylife517

听力短对话，一个是要集中精力，另外就是对短语、小词比较熟悉。

多听多想！！

加油！

甘草子

今天做了篇作文，放在这里。大家狠狠地批吧
题目：
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you thing people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

我的作文：
Nowadays, more and more people attend college or university. Some of them pretend to broaden their knowledge, some of them intend to get new experiences, and others may tend to prepare well for their future career. But as for my opinion, college or university can afford us more than that.

First of all, we attend college not only to increased our knowledge but also broaden our knowledge. That is, though we may choose one subject as our major, we really should learn information from other subjects. Do not limit yourself you may finally find the subject with which owns you to struggle for, to fight for, to devote yourself for.

Secondly, we can learn to communicate with other students. In modern society, team-work spirit is outlined to be considered as one of the most important advantages of an outstanding person. Do you want to be elected as a monitor or do you want to be given a hand on your study by your schoolmate. Then you must be well communicated with not only your classmates, but also your professors and other persons. The better communication you did, the easier you get things through. This principle is not only familiar with your school life but also can be used after you start your work.

Thirdly, attending to college can help us to make our life better. It’s a little earlier to start work just after you graduate from high school. Because at that age, people are to young to distinguish right from wrong. But once you attend the college, the more your learn, the more wisdom you get with which you can be more clearly realized what kind of person you want to be or what is exactly the best choice for you.

Above all, attending college can bring us more than new experiences, career preparation or knowledge increasing. It’s a light ,which lead us from darkness to brightness. It’s a boat, which carry us straight to our achievement. Therefore people should attend college.  

enjoylife517

just after a quick review

1. in the first paragraph, to increase knowledge is same to broaden knowledge. maybe you need to say, increase knowledge in on area,blablabla, but still not that good. you need a new one.

2. in third para, the reason to make life better has a problem. You need to have the reason more concrete. better in what area? if still in career, not a good one.

3. some grammatice problems, like spelling. Especially in last para, what does it mean? it was confusing.

Actually I haven't got any good reason. Let us discuss if other friends get more..

sweetstar

以下是引用甘草子在2005-10-22 22:31:00的发言：

今天做了篇作文，放在这里。大家狠狠地批吧
题目：
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you thing people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

我的作文：
Nowadays, more and more people attend college or university. Some of them pretend to broaden their knowledge, some of them intend to get new experiences, and others may tend to prepare well for their future career. But as for my opinion,（In my opinion). college or university can afford us more than that.

First of all, we attend college not only to increased our knowledge but also broaden our knowledge. That is, though we may choose one subject as our major, we really should learn information from other subjects. Do not limit yourself you may finally find the subject with which owns you to struggle for, to fight for, to devote yourself for. (run on sentence)

Secondly, we can learn to communicate with other students. In modern society, team-work spirit is outlined to be considered as one of the most important advantages of an outstanding person. Do you want to be elected as a monitor or do you want to be given a hand on your study by your schoolmate. Then you must be well communicated with not only your classmates, but also your professors and other persons. The better communication you did, the easier you get things through. This principle is not only familiar with your school life but also can be used after you start your work.

Thirdly, attending to (attending) college can help us to make our life better. It’s a little earlier to start work just after you graduate from high school. Because at that age, people are to young to distinguish right from wrong. But once you attend the college, the more your learn, the more wisdom you get with which you can be more clearly realized what kind of person you want to be or what is exactly the best choice for you.

Above all, attending college can bring us more than new experiences, career preparation or knowledge increasing. It’s a light ,which lead us from darkness to brightness. It’s a boat, which carry us straight to our achievement. Therefore people should attend college.  

我的一些建议。不对的，还请拍砖。

1. 注意语法错误

2. 很多not only, but also. 句式的变化可以多样的。

3。最后一段好像很Chinese，不知道老美看得懂吗？

我的练习作文在http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=139971&page=1， 也请批判的说。

甘草子

今天又作了篇文章。大家来批判吧

How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Mine article:
In now modern society, as the development and the improvement of movies and television, more people are now affected by them than before. You may have noticed that many people started to talk in a Joey or Ross way after the teleplay Friends is on, or you may find that more people now use “You jump I jump” to show their pure love which is just a line from the movie Titanic, or you could hear some persons commence to assert that they think big mouth is very beautiful and can shows personality only because （朱利亚罗伯茨）,a famous movie star, happens to have one.

Why do people’s behaviors appear like that? I think there some reasons lies there:
First, movies or TV programs create such a perfect world for us ,which has no war, no illness, no life confusion, no workforce. In that world, they will feel certain relax and comfortable which they won’t get in the real world. And as techniques develop, people can feel more reality in this unreal world. So now, more and more people prefer to watch TV or movies rather than do anything else after their whole-day work to release their tense spirit.

Another reason is that TV programs or movies have affected us so much is that not everybody considers themselves to be perfect. For instance, some guys may think they are not humorous, while some young women may think they are less of beauty in particular part of their body. Then these young men are likely to start to talk in a Joey way, which is the way a famous TV star talk, and these young women may commence to change their hair styles, clothes, or even part of their body such as nose in order to get themselves look like their idols. In their minds, if they appear like their idols, they will be more popular in their friends. Despite whether this thought right or wrong, this behavior does bring them self-confidence.

From all the reasons above, we can make it clear that why and how we are influenced by TV programs and movies. And to my opinion, if we can get relaxation or  self-confidence from these media masses, this influence seems not bad. But the thing we should is to make sure that the influences are good ones, and won’t do anything wrong to our behaviors.

结尾有些仓促。怎么结比较好？