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michaelxwh

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Some peoples prefer spending their free time outdoors while others prefer enjoying their leisure time indoors. In my point of view, I would like to enjoy my leisure time outdoors. The reason for my chose is based on the following discussions.

The first and the most import reason I would like to provide here is that only by outdoor activities can we enjoy those fantastic natural thing such the fresh air, the glimmering sunshine. This kind of chance is becoming rarer and rarer because our working or living pace become so fast. Working all day alone in the office building, walking in the big city where air is heavily polluted, we may have serious healthy problems if we don’t treasure our opportunities to refresh in outdoor activities.

Another important reason I prefer spending leisure time outdoors is that most outdoor events involve a bunch of people besides you. Then you will get a chance to know more people and make a lot of friend. It is always fascinating to share you thoughts with others, to have interesting talk with friends, and even to do some exciting sports together. In this case, not only your knowledge will be greatly enlarged, but also your health situation will be improved.

The third reason I would like to put it here is that once going out will provide us a chance to know new things. For example, last vacation I go to Hainan, which is one of the most famous scenic spots in China. With so many scenes I have never seen before, with so many unfamiliar cultures and traditions I have never learned from the book, the whole experience is really unforgettable. You can image what a kind time I will spend if I just stay indoors

Of course, some indoor activities will also give us a chance to have fun together with our friends such as having an interesting talk, or playing chess. But for most of time we spend indoors we will just sleeping or idling away and do nothing at all! Without interaction with others, we intend to be very lazy and waste too much our time.

To sum up, I would like to suggest having fun outdoors when we have leisure time. To enjoy the sunshine, to breathe the fresh air, to play soccer with you friends, to travel around in some beautiful places, let’s enjoy our leisure time outdoors.

这里先谢过了！

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-10-10 15:46:45编辑过]

michaelxwh

看来是自己写的太差了~~~

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