1.this is the usage of punctuation in English. Don't put your nose into this.
The dash also appears in attributions of quotations.
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However, in the following question, 'and' connects the last two lists.
1. Each of Hemingway’s wives—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhorn, and Mary Welsh—were strong and interesting women, very different from the often pallid women who populate his novels.
(A) Each of Hemingway’s wives—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhorn, and Mary Welsh—were strong and interesting women,
(B) Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhorn, and Mary Welsh—each of them Hemingway’s wives—were strong and interesting women,
(C) Hemingway’s wives—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhorn, and Mary Welsh—were all strong and interesting women,
(D) Strong and interesting women—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhorn, and Mary Welsh—each a wife of Hemingway, was(C)
(E) Strong and interesting women—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhorn, and Mary Welsh—every one of Hemingway’s wives were
所以,你不要对破折号内的列举太追究了,语言是很灵活的东西。
2.E. 你的改法还是不妥。as disturbing TO his times as they are compelling For ours, disturbing 后的介词 to 是不能换为 in 的。否则不和 for ours 在表达含义上相平行了.
3. 本句是前后影响的比较,所以在时态上前后也有相对性。to his own time 在这里不能用完成时,否则的话句子前后的时态就没有对比性了。在非对比的情况下,是可以用完成时的。
4. in/to his own time 表达意思区别很大,在这里不能互换。 |