OG 724。很简单的问题，一直搞不清，求大神解答

herb.yuan

Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.
(A) Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering
(B) Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber
(C) Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886 and outnumbering
(D) Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering
(E) Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886 ,outnumber

A为什么不对呀？ outnumbering不可以作为动名词修饰信吗？ 并且E选项中which不应该就近指代Dickinson吗？

krystalchenkkk

Which可以跳跃修饰，跳过一个介词短语。

然后A不对是因为"SVO，v-ing"里面v-ing是修饰主句的，需要和主句有逻辑关系，这里这个信的时间段和它outnumber之间没有必然联系。

EG：
My brother studied hard, graduating as the best student.对
My brother studied hard, eating beef every day.错
这两个句子大概是从RON的课里面copy的，不是原句，大概就这么个意思不记得啦~

herb.yuan

krystalchenkkk 发表于 2017-10-20 23:29
Which可以跳跃修饰，跳过一个介词短语。

然后A不对是因为"SVO，v-ing"里面v-ing是修饰主句的，需要和主句 ...

嗯嗯嗯。我懂了，你讲的非常清楚。还有一个类似的问题，就是动名词是需要和主句有逻辑关系的，那如果是过去分词作修饰语呢？它是有什么要求和作用啊，就是修饰和它靠近的是吗？而不一定是修饰主句？就像这道题？ 选E是因为earned修饰records?
By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen of cial national and international speed records, and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she  few to be of dangerously experimental design.
(A) and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she  few to be
(B) earning them at a time that aviation was still so new for many of the planes she  few to be
(C) earning these at a time where aviation was still so new that many of the planes she  few were
(D) earned at a time in which aviation was still so new such that many of the planes she  few were
(E) earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she  few were

krystalchenkkk

herb.yuan 发表于 2017-10-21 09:57
嗯嗯嗯。我懂了，你讲的非常清楚。还有一个类似的问题，就是动名词是需要和主句有逻辑关系的，那如果是过 ...

过去分词可以修饰逗号前面的名词也可以修饰主句的主语，和v-ing一样要求和主句有逻辑关联。
这道题E里面earned修饰records~

herb.yuan

krystalchenkkk 发表于 2017-10-21 15:02
过去分词可以修饰逗号前面的名词也可以修饰主句的主语，和v-ing一样要求和主句有逻辑关联。
这道题E里面e ...

非常清楚了，谢啦