TWE034套模版写的作文,请大家看看－Zeros修改标题，见谅

andyskin11

You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

It is a hard question that you will buy a ticket or a jewelry bracelet when you receive a lot of money. There are some people who think that a piece of jewelry is better, but some people might prefer to attend a great concert. If facing the question, I would probably follow the latter one. In the following discussion, I would like to provide some reasons to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important than this one that attending a great concert is invaluable for me. I think that great music can improve our bodies and mind which always are intense in the busy society. You will feel different spirit through various kinds of concerts. Facts witness and present as below: when you attend rock concerts, you will feel high. When you attend pop concerts, you will feel releasable. When you attend classic concerts, you will feel emotional. Don't you think that these example quoted above are very persuasive?

Culture is another chief and head reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can prove the view, namely that the performance of concerts presents different cultures, which are from the world. We can appreciate various cultures we have never seen through the show of the concerts which are performed by dancing, music, and dramas. If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Superior as a concert ticket is, however, a piece of jewelry has some advantages, such as a good investment and attracting everyone in the party. Nevertheless, the merits of a concert ticket carry much more weight than that of a diamond bracelet. So the conclusion is the most striking and obvious.

To sum up, given these reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely reach the conclusion that a concert ticket is more worth than a piece of jewelry. In fact, not only do I prefer to attend a concert, but also I prefer to invite concerts as much as possible to my town.

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farsuccess

You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

It is a hard question that you will buy a ticket or a jewelry bracelet when you receive a lot of money. There are some people who think that a piece of jewelry is better, but some people might prefer to attend a great concert. If facing the question, I would probably follow the latter one. In the following discussion, I would like to provide some reasons to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important than this one that attending a great concert is invaluable for me. I think that great music can improve our bodies and mind(理由有些牵强了。应当是relax our mind and muscles) which always are intense(especially) in the busy society. You will feel different spirit (be in different moods) through various kinds of concerts. Facts witness and present as below: when you attend rock concerts, you will feel high(不要口语化，excited). When you attend pop concerts, you will feel releasable. When you attend classic concerts, you will feel emotional. Don't you think that these example quoted above are very persuasive?

Culture is another chief and head reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can prove the view, namely that the performance of concerts presents different cultures, which are from (different regions of ) the world. We can appreciate various cultures we have never seen through the show of the concerts which are performed by dancing, music, and dramas. If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Superior as a concert ticket is, however, a piece of jewelry has some advantages, such as a good investment and attracting everyone in the party. Nevertheless, the merits of a concert ticket carry much more weight than that of a diamond bracelet. So the conclusion is the most striking and obvious.

To sum up, given these reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely reach the conclusion that a concert ticket is more worth than a piece of jewelry. In fact, not only do I prefer to attend a concert, but also I prefer to invite concerts as much as possible to my town.

错误不多，只是希望模板的一些句子能稍微换一下，变成自己的，很多句子有似曾相识的感觉

andyskin11

感谢版主指点….我会再加油的