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chasedream0822

The javelin has a sharp point, which is more obviously dangerous than the discus; moreover, the discus is actually more likely to injure bystanders because, especially when wet, it can slip out of the thrower's hand and fly in a random trajectory.

javelin has a sharp point and is obviously more dangerous than the discus; however,

javelin, with its sharp point, is more obviously dangerous than the discus; however,

楼主读来读去都觉得这两个选项意思好像没差。。。这题的正确答案是下面这句，求NN解释啊

Fiona09

这题一定要根据语意来判断，给楼主贴出一个大神的解释：

The javelin has a sharp point and is obviously more dangerous than the discus; however, the discus is actually more likely to injure bystanders because, especially when wet, it can slip out of the thrower's hand and fly in a random trajectory.

This choice is not correct because it takes the reason that makes the javelin “more obviously dangerous”. Per this choice, the javelin has two traits:
1.        It has a sharp point.
2.        It is more dangerous than the discus.

This choice fails to say that the javelin becomes obviously dangerous because it has a sharp point. Choice E corrects this error. It clearly says that the javelin is more dangerous because of its sharp point.

Now let’s see the use of “more obviously dangerous” and “obviously more dangerous”. Notice the placement of the word “more”. In the original sentence, it modifies “obviously” and not “dangerous”. Javelin is obviously dangerous. But what makes it “more” obviously dangerous is its sharp point.

chasedream0822

Fiona09 发表于 2016-12-21 10:38
这题一定要根据语意来判断，给楼主贴出一个大神的解释：

The javelin has a sharp point and is obviously ...

啊啊理解了谢谢你~~

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